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Review #1, by Rainpixie Ten

21st April 2013:
I'm glad they ended up together! Did Julian just not like her? Or did he decline her advances because he knew about Scorpius's crush on her? Over all very cute!

Author's Response: Julian really didn't like her, poor girl -- he thinks Rose is a bit odd. Which she is, but it's the right kind of odd for Scorpius, apparently! (I don't think he actually had any idea Scorpius was interested in Rose. Scorpius himself didn't know it 100% until he kissed her outside the library!)

I'm so happy you enjoyed this story! Reading over your reviews has reminded me anew of how much I enjoyed writing it, too. Definitely have to return to these characters soon. Thank you once more for reading and reviewing and saying such lovely things! ♥


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Review #2, by Rainpixie Five

21st April 2013:
OK I was actually laughing out loud at the end of this chapter. My roommates are giving me dirty looks because they are studying for finals and I'm over here giggling. I should also be studying but I'm not. Instead I'm reading your story and I'm very pleased with my decision!

Author's Response: My roommate often gave me odd looks for laughing aloud while reading -- trust me, you're not alone in that respect! ;) I think it's really awesome that it's my story you're laughing at, though! Your reviews have made me want to jump into a sequel for this story even more. REALLY thinking that might be my summer fic project now...

But look at me, babbling away in responses to you. Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me what you thought of this story! ♥ I may sound like a broken record, but I truly do appreciate it!


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Review #3, by Rainpixie Three

21st April 2013:
I love that her vendetta against him isn't based on Slytherin vs Gryffindor prejudices. It seems slightly more believable that the houses have less animosity towards each other now that the war is over

Author's Response: I think that a lot of the Slytherin/Gryffindor prejudices would have disappeared after Voldemort's downfall -- not all of them, of course, but it might not have been so contentious among the Houses. I'm glad that you seem to agree, too! It gets a bit tiring too, I think. Fresh argument excuses are needed every now and again.

Thank you again for taking the time to leave me all these reviews! Even though it's taken me a while to respond to them, it really does mean a lot to me to have them. :)


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Review #4, by Rainpixie One

21st April 2013:
This is my first rose/scorpius story and I'm really excited to keep reading! I already like Rose's personality :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to these reviews! I've had a bit of an insane few weeks, but I just finished my final exams and am going to answer all of these now. :)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far! Rose/Scorpius is really the only next gen pairing I like reading about on a regular basis. :D This Rose was heavily inspired from a friend's portrayal of her in a different story, but I do miss writing her. She was a lot of fun! I think I might try and write a sequel to this story over the summer, actually.

Thank you for reviewing! ♥


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Review #5, by tonkslunabellatrixniamhx One

20th January 2013:
i've really liked this so far! and i think i may just spend the rest of the day reading it! :) xx ~ Niamh

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear it! :) I wrote this story several months ago, and it's just still so nice to see people come back and enjoy it -- writing's magic that way. It doesn't stop when the author's done, you know? (But I think my heavily sugared coffee this morning has made me a bit sentimental!)

I'd love to see your opinion on the rest of the story, too! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me a review on this. It really made my morning to wake up and see it! ♥


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Review #6, by Serendipity1234 Ten

28th November 2012:
That was really cute :) it was funny and sweet and I really like Rose and Scorpius. And Al, who's adorably moody.
I didn't even realize I was reading a completed story when I started this, but it was short and sweet. Well done :)

Author's Response: Well, most of what I want to say I've just said below... but it all still stands! :3 Thank you, once again, for taking the time to leave me these reviews -- I really do appreciate it! ♥

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Review #7, by Serendipity1234 Ten

28th November 2012:
That was really cute :) it was funny and sweet and I really like Rose and Scorpius. And Al, who's adorably moody.
I didn't even realize I was reading a completed story when I started this, but it was short and sweet. Well done :)

Author's Response: Ah, I'm so happy that you liked it! Al really is adorably moody; I think his responses to his cousin's antics were one of my favorite parts of this story.

This was a short story, but I'm pleased with the length -- and I'll admit that it's out of my comfort zone, so I'm not sure how it would have fared, being much longer! :3 I honestly do appreciate your leaving me such lovely reviews on it, though, and again, I'm pleased to hear that you thought it was a cute story.

Hoping to see you around again quite soon!!


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Review #8, by Serendipity1234 Seven

28th November 2012:
I really like this story so far! Rose is funny and really unique, I don't think I've ever seen her portrayed like this before :)
I do wish you would've included Scorpius' lesson on flirting, though. I think it would've been really funny and cute. Would you consider adding it somewhere?
Looking forward to the rest you have here! And please update soon :)

Author's Response: I'm very pleased to see that you enjoyed this! I had a lot of fun writing Rose in this story; a lot of her personality was inspired by a Rose in a story from a friend of mine, but I didn't imagine I'd grow so attached to her myself. ;)

A lot of people have asked about Scorpius's flirting lesson, actually. I'm considering writing a one-shot about it! If I do, I'll mention it here, so keep your eyes peeled. You never know!

Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review on this story! ♥


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Review #9, by soufflegirl99 One

4th October 2012:
I love the huge variation in genre - you are so talented as you can swop from such deep emotive one shots to funny light chapters. I am hooked on this story all ready - it had me reading on ravenously from the first sentence. It has a unique title and plot - a very original plot with a fab new perception of rose that I think stands out among all the other sarcastic, all-the-boys-want-her kind of portrayal. It's nice to have a fresh look on the characters and to see them all in a new light. You did this very well I thought.I'd like to see a lot more of this, thank you for this fab fab story!! :)

Author's Response: Well, fancy seeing you over here! :) This definitely isn't like most of the other things on my author's page, but somehow I like that. I do like being versatile, and I think it's good to explore different writing styles and genres, you know?

I really do miss writing this story sometimes, for the precise reasons you pointed out -- its lightheartedness, Rose's personality. :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed it so much, and I'd love to hear your opinions on further chapters, too.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review this for me, and I hope to see you back very soon! ♥ You're awesome!


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Review #10, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Five

30th September 2012:
Oh godric xD
I'm actually dying from that last part. Rose is indeed a "skeleton key to mischeif". You could probably make her have a dance party with hippogriffs and it would seem plausible xD

Why on earth is she so obsessed with Julian anyways? Just because he's extremely attractive? Is she really that shallow?

Hilarious chapter, this made me laugh out loud. Can't wait to read on!
~Gill

Author's Response: I sort of love that phrase, just so you know -- "skeleton key to mischief." I might copyright it. ;) I'm glad you're getting such amusement of this story, though! It was a lot of fun to write, and I do miss it sometimes. I am very much considering doing a sequel!

Um, yeah. She basically likes him because he is every kind of hot. Shallow is definitely the word for it! But then, after five chapters, that's probably not /too/ surprising.

Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review on this. It really made my day! :3 Hope to see you back by before too long!!


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Review #11, by Ligeia Ten

31st August 2012:
Thank you SO MUCH for this story !!! It is definitely one of the funniest and well written fanfics that I've read so far! I hope there will be more stories like that from you.

Author's Response: Thank YOU for this review -- what a lovely surprise, to log on and see two completely unexpected reviews on this story! I'm so unbelievably pleased with the reaction this novella has garnered. :)

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it, and moreover, that you stopped and took the time to tell me so! Thank you very much, and I hope to see you around! ♥


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Review #12, by Maya Ten

31st August 2012:
That was one of the best Rose-Scorpius fics I read so far. Lovely, funny and so cute!!

thank you!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it! :3 I had a lot of fun writing this story, and lately have been thinking about a sequel -- it's fantastic to see that people are still reading it.

Thank you for taking the time to leave me your opinion! It's very much appreciated! ♥


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Review #13, by SweetAndSilent21 Ten

9th August 2012:
This story was absolutely fantastic! I hope you write something like it again in the future. You write humor wonderfully. :)

Author's Response: Oh, wow -- thank you so much for such an unexpectedly lovely review! :) It really did make my day to click onto my page and see this.

I actually do miss writing these character quite a bit, and am not opposed to writing a sequel about them. Vague bits of it are swirling around my head, so it may not be too long before I set them to paper! I'm beyond pleased to see you enjoyed the humor; sometimes I feel like my humor writing is hit or miss, and you really have boosted my confidence there.

I can't tell you how much I appreciate your taking the time to leave me your opinion on this story! Thank you!! ♥


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Review #14, by hdawg Ten

16th July 2012:
THE KISS. MUST BE NOW. IT MUST. OR I WILL SPAM YOU. That last sentence is a lie, I won't. But they'd better fall into each other's arms today or I will be filled with sexual frustration until I read the sequel, yeah? ;) SEQUEL PLEASE!

"And if you must know, Fred once went missing for twelve hours after he put itching powder in our cousin Louis's underwear. Uncle George found him strapped to the underside of his bed with belts, taking a nap. Not just under the bed. Strapped to the bed./I've got to say, Fred's sort of a genius." Wowzers.

And once more, this chapter is getting a 10/10 for getting Percy's personality to a tee: "I don't think Uncle Percy taught his family how to make jokes./Or how to have fun./Or how to smile at all."

"He could either accept graciously and we could return to our tentatively amicable relationship of earlier. Or he could hex my nose and make it fall off." OR HE COULD FORGIVE, FOREGT AND PROPOSE. I like my option better, no 'ffence.

"A sort of clenched and panicked feeling sort of hammered on my spleen just then because that was a first, those thoughts. And I didn't know what to make of them." You know! I love you for this. I can feel a kiss coming on.that sounds weird. And it's not guilt, Rose, it's lurve ("there was a sort of nauseating thing mixed in that might have been guilt").

Ahahahaha:"Now I was distinctly feeling self-conscious, like I'd gotten a wad of spinach stuck in my front teeth and didn't know it, and he couldn't tear his eyes away." I like this, I like this very much. Maybe because I'm imagining Rose with Hermione-esque teeth before she resized them.

Another reason for the 10/10 rating: "Well...that seems a bit rude." I didn't have to stand here and listen to him blaspheme my family tree, despite that fact that - well, yes, we were a bit bonkers... More the type that would cause a cat to keep running headlong into a wall for no apparent reason." I don't understand how you do this, it's like you tap into my childish part of my mind and write down everything that would make me laugh. And you sound uncannily like Miranda Hart, whom I absolutely adore.

"I was still trying to come up with a good comment to follow this when he kissed me./Merlin, his lips were soft." AWO~ if you could see my face, you would understand the feelings I am feeling. I love you. I love this. This is bloody fantastic. I repeat my earlier offer: b m9?

Maybe it's all the happiness within me with their kissing an all, but this made me laugh too much~: "I've been wanting to do that for the longest time," he said, and something inside me sort of melted a bit. "It's a bit hard to work up the nerve, though, when you’re commenting on how much troll blood I've got in me."/I smiled sheepishly. "Well, you know. That's my way of attracting men, Scorpius Malfoy."

AND I'M FINISHED AND I AM SAD AND I WISH THAT I HAD FINISHED THIS EARLIER SO THAT I COULD HAVE SQUEE-ED EARLIER. AND THIS IS BRILLIANT. AND THERE BETTER BE A SEQUEL. AND I SHOULD TURN OFF CAPSLOCK BUT ALL MY FEELINGS ARE COMING OUT.

i love you.

Author's Response: I'm going to apologize. Again. Because these responses are really, really not doing your reviews justice and I have all sorts of feelings of guilt inside of me for trying to respond to them now, even though it's basically a lost cause. SO HERE GOES.

So, bottom line: YOU LIKED THE KISS YAYAYAYAYYY. ♥ ♥ ♥ I'm so glad!! I will be yours, ofc. -nods- Also, the Miranda Hart bit made me chuckle so much, because Annie actually introduced me to 'Miranda' and I freaking love that show and I think a bit of this at least was written while I was tripping along merrily through the episodes, so that's kind of uncanny.

THANK YOU SO, SO, SO MUCH FOR READING THIS AND REVIEWING IT AND BEING SO SUPPORTIVE AND /EVERYTHING/. Caps lock is a necessary part of an everyday life, you know. BUT SERIOUSLY, I HONESTLY CANNOT THANK YOU ENOUGH. ♥


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Review #15, by hdawg Nine

16th July 2012:
If they don't kiss soon, I might cry. The sexual tension is killing me! (metaphorically speaking, of course; otherwise that would be a rather slow, strange kind of death)

"It was very, very difficult to resist the urge to have a small victory dance in the middle of the lawn, let me tell you. I'd even had one prepared, but as such, my talents went unobserved another day." Please make a drawing gif of this now. It had better involve the funky chicken or I'll be sad.

Rose is so smarmy. And Scorpius is brillopads: "Scorpius mumbled something that sounded like "alligator corset" and didn't choose to elaborate further." I would like to know what he is thinking so that I can think of some way to relate it to Rose's undying love for him.

"I was stuck alone with a murderous Slytherin who clearly wanted nothing more than to conk me in the head and drag my body into the dungeons" and then he would nurse it better and they can fall in love? I knew I'd be able to find something in here to get Scorpius dressed up in a nurse's outfit ;) and now you're imagining it, aren't you?

"I was being truthful, I'd sort of forgotten he'd existed since beginning that whole revenge plan. But that was probably because I was filled with such -" love? lust? sexual frustration?! you know I'm right.

Your brief representation of Slughorn was enough to warrant this chapter a rating of 10/10. Genuinely. It was so brilliant that I want to keep it in my mind palace for all of eternity and read it over and over again.

HUGO! HOW COULD YOU?! Albus is forever my baby now, forget you. I am upset. Although if Rose had known that, then this fandabbydozey chapter wouldn't exist. Then again, she might have KISSED SCORPIUS ALREADY. It's a tie, really.

"I'm sure you didn't mean for things to wind up in a heap of rubble with Scorpius on top of me, while I was shouting" Nope, doesn't sound weird to me. H3h3h3. Cr33p3r award, anyone?

WOT? ONLY ONE CHAPTER?! HOW AM I MEANT TO SURVIVE WITHOUT SCOROSE LOVE FROM HERE? WA :'( I don't think you quite realise how sad I am that it has taken me so long to read this. I have missed out and I am so sorry. This is unbelievably sad. Even the weather outside is a perfect pathetic fallacy. Although, to be fair, it always rains in England anyway.

Author's Response: Sexual tension, woo! But really, what is a good romantic comedy without it? And if a good romcom needs it, then so does a passable attempt at one. :)

I'll hire Julia to make funky chicken gifs, yes? I am also v. pleased you liked Slughorn, he's loads of fun to write. I do try and squeeze him in, where appropriate. -shoves Albus in your general direction- LOOK AT WHAT YOUR REVIEWS DO TO MY RESPONSES. NONE OF THE SENSE. NONE OF IT.

Please don't be sorry!! Nothing at all required you to review this in the first place, and I honestly am just so, so glad that you are enjoying it as much as you are. You almost more than anyone else have made me seriously contemplate a sequel. :) Also, the last sentence of this review made me laugh perhaps harder than I should have.

That is all. ♥


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Review #16, by hdawg Eight

16th July 2012:
BACK! BACKEDY BACK BACK! I am looking forward to this chapter immensely. They'd better kiss soon or I'm only joking, I can't hurt a fly, I'm so weak.

"delighted to see I'd sprayed his face with bits of soggy toast upon speaking" ew, Rose, you're disgusting. Save your delight for when you kiss Scorpius later, AM I RITE?!

"Sodding hell. I hate this boy, and on principle I should not be admiring his biceps." YES YOU SHOULD! Fel them! Hold him! MARRY HIM! I might be getting too emotionally involved.ah well!

These lines deserve an award: "I think it must have been some defining characteristic of female teachers at this school - they either had to resemble birds, or they just needed to be off their rockers. Bonus points if you fit into both categories."

"They folded their arms in an identical motion" I like to think that these two are secretly best friends and go on 'girl dates' in the town, and bitch about people behind their backs, and are all wonderful and sassy and have a secret handshake, and say 'You go, gurlfriend!'. Spin-off now please ;)

"with Malfoy at the head of them, waving his Beater’s bat at the crowd like he was something special." HE IS SOMETHING SPECIAL! HE'S YOUR SOULMATE!1! Gah!

NO ROSE! STOP! DON'T BE MEAN! :'( y wud u do dis? but Scorpius sounding like an angry troll makes me laugh more than you can imagine.

And yes! No Julian...this means more spin-offs in my head of what he could have been doing.

THIS WAS BRILLIANT. Thank you!

Author's Response: I am going to open this response by saying two things: Firstly, that I am very sorry it has taken me so long to respond at all, and second that I very much enjoyed watching you sweat as you wondered whether a Scorose kiss would ever come. That is all. :)

I really do appreciate your reviews, though, because you are by and large one of this story's largest supporters, and that means so much to me! You just have so much enthusiasm for my characters. :) There's just some uniquely lovely emotion that comes from hearing someone you adore yell at your characters, yes?

Pfft, why are you thanking me? I just wrote tosh -- you, the reviewer, are the one who needs the thanks! ♥ Albus is all yours after this, of course. And this response sucks so much but I really, really do appreciate your leaving it for me and I am so glad you like this story. :3


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Review #17, by WishfulMuggle Ten

15th July 2012:
This story was awesome! I love Scorpius/Rose and this was just great:) Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you -- I'm really happy you liked it! :) It was a lot of fun to write, and quite relaxing -- nothing too brain-taxing, you know. It all came quite quickly!

Thank YOU for reviewing it! :D I hope to see you back here before too long, too! ♥


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Review #18, by Vivyan Nine

13th July 2012:
Ehh I was close haha (:

Author's Response: You were close. :D It was a relative of Rose's, after all -- but then, that's not surprising, judging by just how many people with Weasley blood must have been running around Hogwarts in this era...

I hope you enjoyed the story -- thank you for reviewing it for me! Opinions are always appreciated! :3


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Review #19, by Vivyan Seven

13th July 2012:
I'm betting Albus told Julian as a way to get back at Rose for the whole diaper incident.

Author's Response: Quite a lot of people suspected Albus! Which isn't too off the mark, I don't think -- he certainly had motive. Rose is pretty horrible to him. :D

Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review on this story -- it means a lot to me that you did!


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Review #20, by tony_starks Ten

15th June 2012:
Oh my Merlin. I don't think I can ever adequately enunciate my adoration of this fic.

ROSE; oh. my. salazar. She was PERFECT - my friend (who I kept showing passages to) thinks she's like me, I don't know if I should be concerned about that ;) - and wonderful and hilarious and are you sure you've never written a romantic comedy before because damn, girl, she was the perfect character!

SCORPIUS; holy crap. He was beautiful. I adored him and how he managed to put up with Rose and HE WAS SUCH AN AWESOME PERSON BRO HE WAS FANTASTIC and ugh I have so much adoration for this character, tbh!

PIPPA; oh, what a babe. She was such a great character and I normally don't like Rose's OC!bestie because they normally are written annoyingly but I loved Pippa so kudos! She was funny and adorable and er romantic history and quirks gave her a rounded finish - her dynamic with others was both realistic and amazing!

ALBUS; oh, ally. Silly boy, listening to Roxanne. (; Seriously, he was great. He suited Pips so well, and I loved how adorable they were and how they tag-teamed Rose when she was being ridiculously irrational and "do anything but her" HIS REACTION CAN I BOTTLE IT UP AND CUDDLE IT

HUGO; I'm in two minds about this character. On one hand, I feel sorry for him because he's young and seems a bit of a pushover in an impressionable family. On the other, HOW COULD HE DO THAT. If I was Rose, I'd have hexed his nose off and called him Vold-incarnate. Because I'm nice like that. (;

Honestly, I loved it.

-- jane xoxo

Author's Response: First off, let me say that I very much appreciate your penname. :D And secondly -- hello, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave me a review on this story (and such a long one at that)! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I'm quite sure I've never written a romantic comedy before, yes, and I'm very flattered you had to ask. :P Aren't Rose and Scorpius just the best? I loved writing this for all the dry humor it provided -- Rose's sarcasm, Al's sarcasm, Scorp's sarcasm. It's all very much derived from my equally dry sense of humor. :D I'm just over the moon that you typed out /all those characters/ to squee over them and oh my gosh, you're pretty much my favorite person right now. ♥

Again -- I'm so, so pleased you liked the story! If I've made one person happy with something I've written, then it's a success, and I cannot thank you enough for the review. ♥ Hope to see you back sometime! Thanks for being so awesome! :D


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Review #21, by forsakenphoenix Ten

14th June 2012:
B'aww. It's over. :( But SCORPIUS. omg. He's just so ashdlkgfala. I am totally fangirling over your Scorpius but I cannot help it. He's just...so charming and sweet and then he just kisses her and they grin at each other and WHY DO YOU NOT WRITE MORE ROMCOMS? Seriously, you are so good at it,and you make your characters easy to relate to. It's just all so well-written and fantastic and well, darn, I want a Scorpius of my own. The ending just made me squee and then sigh like a dreamy romantic.

So recap: I love Scorpius. I love this story. I love you! And this is my 600th review, and I am so unbelievably glad it went to you. You deserve it.

Author's Response: Ahaha! SCORPIUS. ♥ I'd like to bring him back someday, and I really think I might. I'm not sure when, but the fun of this story combined with all the amazing encouragement I've gotten about it makes me want to try. I'm so, so happy you think the romcom experiment deal was a success!! I am sending lots of mental hugs your way. If you experience squeezing feelings throughout the day, it shall probably be me. :3

You. You are just fabulous, and I'm so glad I got to know you and make friends with you through this site. ♥ I cannot ever say it enough, just /thank you/ so much!! Gah. I have tears in my eyes. Shall stop drinking coffee now ~



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Review #22, by forsakenphoenix Nine

14th June 2012:
HUGO! Oh dear. I guess I should have seen that coming - though I definitely did not guess his part in breaking Pippa and Scorpius up! What a little sneak.

Poor Scorpius. I hope he forgives Rose, but she was so mean to him and he didn't even do anything. That's just like her. To act without thinking. It seems to get her into trouble quite frequently.

I love her little nicknames for McGonagall too. She's so petulant and childish and I think it works well for the characterization you're going for with her.

I'm kind of sad this is almost over. But I'm excited to read the last chapter and see if things get resolved and I want Rose and Scorpius to get together!

Author's Response: Well, most people didn't see it coming -- including me, for probably half of this story. -shifty look- And poor Scorp indeed, really. He tries to hard and Rose keeps smacking him down. :D

Ah, that's a good word for her -- childish! And somehow, I do think it works, or it's seemed to. Rash, impulsive, headstrong. Really, I don't think it's any wonder she's Ron's child. Hermione probably shakes her head over Rose at least once a day.

THANK YOUUU. Have I said it enough yet? Probably not. Because I seriously am just so happy for all your reviews, and I should like you to know so. :3 It means so much to me to have your opinion on this!


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Review #23, by forsakenphoenix Eight

14th June 2012:
Well, that was not what I was expecting from her sabotage, but it works. I do feel bad for Scorpius - nothing "mild" about it. I love how determined Al and Pippa are to stop her, though. It's kind of amusing because they weren't sure about her whole deal to begin with and now she wants to go back on it and they're desperate to stop her.

Rose is kind of an idiot, but I do hope Scorpius isn't mad enough at her for ruining his recruitment chances (if she did, at all) to want to be with her. I WANT THEM TOGETHER. Is that too much to ask? I think not.

I can't wait to read about Mcgonagall's wrath. :) -scurries off to the next chapter-

Author's Response: Sabotage always has to come with a heaping side dish of Scorpius-insulting, yes? We shouldn't expect anything less from Rose. :) Poor Al and Pippa -- they just keep trying to prevent her from making bad decisions, and she always decides not to listen to them. And surprise, they're always right!

Rose is very much kind of an idiot. :D Although fluffeh Scorose is never too much to ask of anyone, you know. It would be high on my own personal genie wishlist. (Lulz, I have so much coffee in my right now. I WARNED YOU ~)

Seriously. Thank you SO much for all these reviews. I can't even begin to tell you what it means to me that you were willing to do this! ♥


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Review #24, by forsakenphoenix Seven

14th June 2012:
Oh my goodness, Rose. I don't know how she expects anything to get done if she can't even speak to Julian without wanting to faint or vomit or whatever. And poor Julian, all stuttering awkward boy who isn't quite sure how to approach a girl who has a crush on him that he doesn't return the feelings for.

But SCORPIUS. She's going to sabotage him and that makes me sad. I bet it wasn't even him who told Julian in the first place, was it? Harrumph.

I can't even imagine what's going to happen at that Quidditch match. Sheesh.

PS: I am sorry for the short reviews but I hope it's not a big deal because well, I mean, there's only so many times I can tell you how much I love your Scorpius and that you're a fantastic writer and you totally nail this romcom thing down perfectly and you are perfect. The end.

Author's Response: And you have hit the nail on the head, essentially, as far as Rose's problems with Julian -- well, some of her problems, essentially. All smooth sailing until she gets into a situation where she's got to speak to the poor bloke. :3 (In all fairness, with how I've got him imagined in my head, he's quite loffleh!)

SABOTAGE AHOY ~ That's your conjecture, isn't it? Hmmm. We shall wait and see! (That's a pointless attempt at being mysterious, really, since I already know you've read the rest...)

♥ Please stop being so fabulous. You're going to give the rest of the world an inferiority complex. And don't even worry about the review length, yo (and really, they're not even short)! The fact you took the time to do this at all makes me unbelievably happy!


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Review #25, by forsakenphoenix Six

14th June 2012:
Oh, oh, Janechel! *flails* Scorpius is just...EEE! I want to snog him now. So precious and charming and he BLUSHES. omg. Be still my heart.

I love Rose's interactions with Albus, as usual. There's just something about them. Even though they're cousins, they have that brother-sister kind of relationship. So much familial love. Especially when she revealed what Roxanne and Louis did last Christmas. :P

But yes, I think Scorpius and Rose's conversations are my favorite ever. Their banter and teasing and ALL OF IT IS SO LOVELY.

I think if all ScoRoses were as hilarious and awkward as this, they might be in contention for a spot on my favorite pairings list. :)

Author's Response: SEE! I think a lot of people, before all these chapters were posted, must have been wondering why on earth Scorpius was such a big deal to me. But I, writing ahead as always, knew his more lovely qualities. ;)

The Rose/Albus relationship was arguably one of my favorite ones to write in this entire story, even more than Rose/Scorpius. That sort of familial bickering, like you said, is just so much fun. I like to imagine Weasleys and company are really tight-knit. :)

Baww, you are so sweet. ♥ My cheeks are literally tingling from the blushes. Trufax. I'm just so glad you liked this and took it seriously enough to read on! :D Thank you so much for such lovely, heartfelt reviews! ♥


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