What were you thinking? Grammar is important, learn it. Also, Fred and George are completely head over heels for this girl as soon as they meet her... this is a disgrace in their name. No one will hold hands with someone they just met. BE REALISTIC. And the 'changing into our Hogwarts robes' paragraph was quite disturbing. Every character is clearly out of character. A very poor fanfiction. Report Review
This. Is. Awesome. Only one problem, you stopped writing. =) Report Review
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