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Review #1, by dashhis chapter 1

5th March 2012:
What were you thinking? Grammar is important, learn it.
Also, Fred and George are completely head over heels for this girl as soon as they meet her... this is a disgrace in their name. No one will hold hands with someone they just met. BE REALISTIC.
And the 'changing into our Hogwarts robes' paragraph was quite disturbing. Every character is clearly out of character. A very poor fanfiction.

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Review #2, by Chloe chapter 1

3rd March 2012:
This. Is. Awesome.
Only one problem, you stopped writing. =)

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