4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MsJacksonMalfoyMellark A New Alliance

3rd September 2012:
Update soon, please! More, more, more. :)

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Review #2, by auntbeth The Chase

22nd May 2012:
hello, its me again, i noticed you havent updated, when will you be updating? i really like the story and would like to hear more

Author's Response: Sorry, I had some ISSUES with my account but now I am back in business...i plan on updating at a fast rate now...

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Review #3, by auntbeth New Problems

20th March 2012:
i really like it, please update soon

Author's Response: thanks, I will, I am writing the next couple chapters and need em to be validated


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Review #4, by Gryfindor_Hero The Chase

5th March 2012:
I liked it. It was pretty short for a first installment in a series of only five, and you didn't explain anything in more depth than story summary. I like how you captured the characters so exactly, I really believe you know who you're writing about. 7/10

Author's Response: I think there is a misunderstanding here. This is isn't the entire part 1 of the 5, this is just chapter one of part 1. I didn't explain too much yet on purpose, that is what the next chapter will be about. Thanks for your review, check back soon for the next chapter!

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