LOOOVE IT! soo good! i can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: YAY!!! I am so glad that you like it!!! It makes me smile when I know people enjoy it!

Thank you for the review it really made my day! I don't expect a lot of reviews but even one saying 'I loved it' like yours makes me smile and feel like I'm doing a good job!!!

Coming soon I promise!!!

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Well, my dear, I enjoyed it this time around as well. You still used some rather awkward wording in spots (don't blame me for those things, you changed some things around after I edited. :P) but I still love where this is going so far. :) can't wait to edit and read the next chapter, keep it up!
PS: no noted appreciation for my edits?! *mock hurt face*love you!
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: I WILL WRITE THEM IN I PROMISE!!! I keep forgetting when I post them because I'm just trying to get them up :P derp I sowwy Thank you so much for all your help with everything!! I'll send you the next chapter when I write it up :)

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This is really interesting so far! I like your characterization of the different characters, as well as their crazy names. :) I find a couple parts of the story a little unrealistic, such as Lisa not knowing who James is (considering they've been at school together for five years and he is famous), but they're only minor. Anyways, great story so far, and update soon!

Author's Response: YAY for crazy names!!

It's not that she doesn't know the name but she doesn't care to think anything of it. She's kind of like a loner and not really interested in the day to day drama of things and takes the gossip that her friend Carly says as if it doesn't really matter. She's heard the name before but she doesn't really care to remember who he is or know him for that matter. She thinks of both Fred and James as one of the 'egotistical quidditch blokes' and feels that none of them need the attention of one girl.

James and Fred don't know her because she's the kind of person who hides in the corner.

I agree it is a little unrealistic that they don't know eachother but it's more like they didn't notice eachother.

Thank you so much for the review I hope this clears things up for you! Updates are coming and more about Lisa's past and her disinterest in the 'popular' ness coming soon!!!

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*smirk* James is awesome, yet dense and a little bit prattish at the same time and I LOVE him! And I feel bad for Lisa bein names Monalisa, that would stink if people found out her real name. Besides James, who obviously knows now. And yes, Fred is a jerk. I think it's actually kind of awesome that she deosn't know who these two are. Might deflate their heads a bit.

Author's Response: I think James is better than Fred but Freddy is awesome so it's ok. James has been given everything his entire life so he thinks a lot of himself and I love how Lisa has no idea who they are!!! I had imagine the senario and was instantly in love with the idea!!!

Thank you so much for ALL of your amazing reviews they seriously made my day and I don't think I've been so motivated to get started on the stories that would have been placed on the back burner. You give me inspiration to write and a reason to keep going! You are such an amazing writer and for you to get so worked up about my stories seriously means a lot!

Thank you so much for your story and your reviews and just for being an amazing person!!!

Now one last thing YOU NEED TO WRITE BECAUSE I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN YOUR STORY GAH!

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Bela!! I do really enjoy this story and I look forward to seeing where you go with it. I still stand by what I said about that one paragraph. Ellipses just don't capture the emotion you're going for. They portray a sort of disconnected thought process. You take a pause web you read them just like commas but with ellipses it's more of a way to show that they're slowly connecting thoughts or adding things together as they go. Not frustration. That is all. Wonderful job, still a few typos but much better than usual. :) can't wait to read more. I love you!!
9/10 S2
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: you...stink...butt...I...like...my...ellipses...and...i'm...doing...this...to...piss...you...off...bwahahahaa...this...is...so...much...fun...and...that...paragraph...was...exactly...the...way...I...want...it...ELLIPSES...and you went through this chapter so typos are your fault!!!

HAHAHAHA

Love you!!!
XOXO
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