Pssh, not cringeworthy at all - in fact, it was excellent for a first chapter! I loved your introduction, showing how life was like for the other Weasley/Potter kids, and then showing poor Lucy's life! I can already tell that this will be a very entertaining story, and that I won't regret reading it! Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
- Linn Report Review
Okay, now i'm just reviewing all your stories like a creep, what of it?
Anyway, love this story, it's different and i've never read a story where Lucy is portrayed this way...
Can't wait to read more, update soon! Report Review
I loved this. :) I've never read a story with Lucy as the main character and I think you did a great job. Update soon I can't wait to read more! :D Report Review
Dont call it cringeworthy! I liked it.
It was just the right combination of humour, randomness and sarcasm for me. I needed a story like this, there are no good fluffy ones anymore!
Hehe, the Tired Teacher Manoeuvere, that is exactly what they do. I really like Lucy, and that conversation between her and her sister at the start was just perfect! The Head Boy, however, he is incredibly annoying. Seriously, how did you managed to make such an irritating character?
Well, I really loved it, and cant wait till the next chapter :)
-Kerryn xx Report Review
"Hey, weren't you that first year kid who cried every night for mummy for a full month? Said they had to put Silencing Charms on you."
That is an epic line.
This story has a hilarious start and I can't wait to read more. I think Lucy has an interesting character in this. Liam Wang also seems funny. Together, they are hysterical.
Please update soon! Report Review
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