realyyy godd! loved it!! plz write more!
good workAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much! So glad you liked it! Report Review
Aw i really liked your one-shot please write more books in the near future.Author's Response: Thank you!! I am thrilled that you liked it so much! I am actually working on a James/Lily story right now, so that should start being posted soon. Report Review
No. Why did it ennnd??
In other words, i loved it ;)Author's Response: Aw thanks!! This made my day!! Report Review
This was an amazing story. I read it and I just loved the last part! Amazing job!Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I am so glad you liked it and thank you for the nice review! Report Review
I like this, it may have been short but it was good. It's really sweet that he confessed to liking her, but I felt sad that they couldn't be together in the end. But, I see that Rose and Scorpius may like each other. :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!! I am glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
hmmm.nice. :) keep writing on stories.Author's Response: Thank you :) I am glad you liked it! Report Review
Bloody amazing! :3 Merlin's pants! You should write more about Draco and Hermione! They are, after all, my OTPAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, I am so glad you enjoyed it!!! I plan on writing a full Dramione story sometime, but don't know when I'll get time, but thanks!! Report Review
Wow. Just, wow.
This is the first DraMione story that I`ve read and it`s totally cool. I mean, even if it`s just a fan-fic, it all fits. Having Rosie and Scorp`s romance was like a continuation of the star-crossed love that once happened to Hermione and Draco. The story is really touching and makes sense.
Wow, to have a come up with a wonderful idea like this, it`s great, really!Author's Response: Aw, thanks :) You made my day!!! I am so glad you liked it and thought it worked out well, I was wondering what people would think of that, so thank you! Report Review
not to be rude, but i don't really like the whole hermone and Draco thing. only because, i think if you're a true Harry Potter fan, you should stick to how J.K. Rowling wrote the characters. i don't normally read this stuff, but i thought i'd give it a chance. you were right about the ending. that's basically the reason i hate the Draco and Hermione thing. because, if they got married, there would be no Rose and ScorpiusAuthor's Response: I don't think it's rude. People will have their opinions and I am always glad to have people who will be honest about what they think. Personally, I like Draco and Hermione together, but that's the kind of thing fanfiction is for. Everyone has things in fanfiction they like and don't like, so I respect your opinion. Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
So sweet.loved the ending most :) sux that she and Draco couldnt be together but at least their kids will have a better opportunity than their parents would of have had.best story ever read.cant wait for the sequel!!Author's Response: You're too kind, thank you so much!! The sequel is already posted, called "Not Our Parents," if you would like to read it. Thanks again for your lovely review, it made my day! :) Report Review
Great story! I hope to read more of your stories :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Wow, so.fast pased. Nice job.Author's Response: Thanks so very much! Glad you liked it! Report Review
awww I wanted to cry just a little bit at this, so tragic! yet so cute :') Bless them, I hope Scoprius and Rose end up together now because of this!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really do appreciate it :) And I am thrilled that you liked it! Report Review
Awesome! I loved it. 10/10 :-)Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :) Report Review
The only real flaw is that there's no way Ron would marry Hermione after she's been involved with a Death Eater.Author's Response: I honestly disagree, but I do appreciate your input :) Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
How sad i really wish they could have wound up together (if only because I'm a sucker for Dramione). It's interesting to see Hermione's struggle between the boy she's always wanted that she can never have and the boy that took so long to realize that she was who he wanted. Great reasoning for Hermione and Draco's inability to be together because of Rose and Scorpius.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was a bit iffy on this one, so your review is greatly appreciated :) Report Review
I enjoyed this one-shot, I found it a little far fetched but that's the beauty of fanfiction, right? :) I really enjoy your writing style, the words flowed pretty well together. I have to say though that my favorite thing is the title, it's perfect! Great job! :)Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you liked the title because I was a bit hesitant with it ;) thanks also for the lovely review :) Report Review
The end line is so sweet... Aww...
Going to read the sequel now...Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!! So glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the lovely review :)
Hope you enjoy the sequel! Report Review
This is a cute one-shot. I love Draco/Hermione stories, and this is no exception. But there were a few things that left me confused. What drew Hermione to Draco? It's a pairing where you have to explain why they like each other, because in the books, they couldn't even stand being in the same right. I was curious why you added the bit with Ron, as it doesn't really add anything to the story. I liked how you showed Draco's downfalls besides his cruelty. He is very cowardly, and he, despite being the leader of his little gang, does really worry about what his friends and family think.
Overall, despite a few inconsistencies, it's a lovely story. I loved the last line. It was cute, but you made Hermione reasonably canon, which seems to be getting rare. It was nicely written, and I enjoyed reading it.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments. Now that you mention it, I can see what was lacking...next time I write them, I will try to add those details. I am glad you enjoyed it anyays, though :) And thank you again for your thoughts! They are very helpful. Report Review
I really liked this, and the last line, was really well though out:)Author's Response: Thanks! I am so glad you liked it and thank you for the lovely review! Report Review
A lovely chapter. Very Intresting. I like Draco and Hermione's stories. I think they are the best. Please write more stories:)Author's Response: Thank you! I love their pairing too! So glad you enjoyed my story! Report Review
please write more!! this is amazingAuthor's Response: I have a sequel posted if you are interested :) thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
you should make this a full story i love it :)Author's Response: Thank you! I am actually writing a oneshot sequel about Scorpius and Rose, so...
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Hermione doesn't have platinum blonde hair :LAuthor's Response: I...don't think I said she did... Report Review
omigosh this is great!! PLEASE write a sequel!! like u could do when rose/scorpius get married or something and hermione encounters draco again!
This was an amazing One-shot and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel!!! please!
10/10! great jobAuthor's Response: Nice idea, actually...I'll add that to my agenda; might be up later this month :)
I am so glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for the review, they always make my day! Report Review
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