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Review #1, by may Lies over Dinner

12th June 2012:
thank merlin you know we so wanna do that

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Review #2, by Sarah Lies over Dinner

9th June 2012:
Good start! Keep it going!

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Review #3, by Dashaaugust7 Lies over Dinner

9th June 2012:
I'm sorry but I'm extremely confused as to what is going on and this story is very choppy and moving to fast. It has a good plot thought but you should revise it.

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Review #4, by Izzy Memories

17th March 2012:
Umm you should capitalize ur summary because it looks as if you aren't trying and this chapter was very confusing you should try and rewrite it though plot is interesting!!

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Review #5, by Lizzie Lizzie Memories

11th March 2012:
It was so cool!! If you wrote a book with Harry Potter stuff like this I would SO read it. The actual thing bores me to tears. LoL Have a great spring break, LENA!! GOTCHA ;)

Author's Response: thank you.i will update soon so pay attion for it cuz i wont notify you again.

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Review #6, by Randi Memories

10th March 2012:
Great job with details and transitioning! I was a little confused but it all made sense at the end of the chapter :) awesome ry ry! A few grammar problems, but overall good writing... Cant wait to see your usual dramatic twists :P

Author's Response: thaks randi.srry about the errrors but my computers dumb.

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Review #7, by Gabby0515 Memories

9th March 2012:
I think this is a very interesting idea. You were right Hermione did except that WAY to fast. And she was very OOC. Not that I mind OOC just pointing that out so you can put a warning in an a/n. Some readers are very particular and can get cruel when that is not pointed out and they continue reading.

Author's Response: thank you so much.i will probly fix it.thou,she will get ooc later in the story after a couple parts.:)

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