Reading Reviews for Power Gone Awry
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Akussa The Start of Something New

6th March 2014:
Hello! I'm here for the review battle and this story called to me because, although I've been around this site for over 5 years (gulp) I've never read a story that centered around Salazar Slytherin!!

This did not disapoint in many aspects. First the "old style" of expression; it felt pompous and dated, just like I might imagine an old fool like him to talk and think ! Alright, old fool might be a bit harsh...
I also loved how superior he thinks he is. Not necessarily by his accomplishements but the intrinsec qualities he considers are better than the others' qualities. He doesn't think much on poor Helga, not seeing that although subdues and not too flashy, her way of life is just as valid and great as his.

I also really enjoyed how this was written in first person, something that can be complex at times and yet, you do it like it's the normal way to write a story. Great work, I really enjoyed it!

 Report Review

Review #2, by magicmuggle01 The Start of Something New

25th February 2012:
A nice little one shot. It's interesting to see one about the creation of the Chamber of Secrets. 9/10. In away you've kind of left yourself open to do a sequel. How about one where the Basilisk petrefied Moaning Mertyle.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks. :) Yeah, I know. I was considering doing one about Myrtle, and one about him leaving. :) Glad to hear you liekd it, thanks.

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login