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Review #1, by neoplasia Albus S. Potter

26th March 2012:
this seems like a good story line. when are you going to update?

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Review #2, by AriesGirl40 Rose Weasley

2nd March 2012:
Okay, your first story, okay. First advice, it's a good plot. Your voice makes it interesting. And, If I were you I would get a Beta. Go over your writing rules on commas. (that was the first thing I noticed.) You have potential as a writer, might as well make it great. Writing is a learning experience.
I shall see where you go with this, next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much and thanks so much for your advice and your right I'm definitely getting a beta. This is not my native language so I'm kind of working on it, your help is greatly appreciated.

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Review #3, by Amy Rose Weasley

23rd February 2012:
Nice start. It looks like you are giving differrent approach to the aurar thing, than we usually read. Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I know this is going to be different approach for whole Aurar thing than usual, you will see/read a lot more later.
thanks for the review.


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