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Review #1, by Abij2 THE HOGWARTS EXPRESS

24th February 2012:
This story runs smoothly from where the last one left off. It is a great continuation, and I hope that you continue this story.
In future chapters, can you maybe go into more detail. Maybe get more into depth with the characters, and really develop their personalities. If you do that, this story will be even better, and make the plot even more interesting.
Thank you for writing this story
Abij2

Author's Response: Thank you for the imput. I love your stories, you know what your talking about. I will do that. About the excitement thing, it will get exciting. I'm just trying to make it like a regular Harry Potter book, starts out kin of boring, then comes the action.

Thanks for the imput,
Dungbomb47


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Review #2, by Abij2 LIFE AS A WIZARD

24th February 2012:
This is a great story. I love the plot, and the dialogue. I like the fact that you switched the first year books slightly around, but still left the majority intact. Sadly it is realistic that Hagrid got fired, also the fact that him and Harry were out of touch.
Two Quick Questions
1) Would Harry really not have enough money to buy 3 broomsticks?
2) As his children are different ages, would they not have already purchased broomsticks for the first two children?
Anyway thanks for the story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the response, I didn't even know that, so I will change that.

Thanks so much,
Dungbomb47


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