Oh. Hello dear...! Im one of those crazy reviewers.

First i want to Thank you for this Lovely story and chapter. And I cant wait for Chapter three.
And i think one of the best parts in this chapter was when Daisy presented us for Candii. I couldnt stop laugh. ( yeah...Also i have a dirty mind. Dont blame me...)
I really hope Daisy and Al end up together. they're cute together ( according to me ) And i might think Albus has this little crush on Daisy... I dont know why... I can just feel it... Please tell me if I´m wrong. Because if you dont...Then I´m afraid... I cant sleep at night. Because I´m always thinking of it.


:)

XoXo Sara Potter

10/10

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i can't wait to see what happens next!!!

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love this story please update soon!

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love this story please update soon!

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OH!! I like, I like!
The ending was funny...Daisy's so smart! ;)
Update!

Love,
iatevoldysnose xox

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I think you've really managed to improve this story from last time. Well done and UPDATE SOON!

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Will there be a chapter 2. I love this story.

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Wow. I didn't see that coming. But Daisy is awkward, so she and Al find a way to make it even more awkward. :D And as for that plan. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter and see how it goes :)

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hey there. I think this has a really good sounding story line. I hope you continue :D

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Will there be a chapter 2. I hope.! This is a really good story.

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Absolutely love this chapter, you are and amazing writer :). I loved your other version with skylark but I think this story with daisy is going to be just as good if not better.
Have a feeling that her dad gave her that bruise :(. Can't wait to find out Albus's reaction to Daisy kissing him, update soon

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I read this the first time, and I was completely in love with Skylar and Albus so do forgive me if I forget she isn't Skylar anymore.

I was really interested by the new summary as well since I LOVE Al/OC.

I really LOVE the start, it sets up this potrait of what her life was like. I was slightly confused as to why she's called Daisy if her name is Theodosia but I think it might be a nickname?

I really like the dynamics of the sleepover because it wasn't just your average girly get together because the boys were dare and it turned to truth or dare. (Which can be a dangerous game ;))

Oh god James in Ginny's underwear, too funny for words to describe!! I love James and he's such a brilliant character :)

One thing, I think you missed the s of it's - "It' simple."

I'm really intrigued about Daisy's background what with her alcoholic father and evil step-mother. I kinda have an inkling that it might have been her dad who gave her the bruise on her arm.

Way to go Daisy, all I can think is famous last words. She said she wouldn't kiss Al and then what does she go and do: kiss Al.

Love it and I can't wait for the next chappie!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

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AW.

I LOVED THE BEGINNING!!! It wasss so godd! KEEEP WRITINNNGG!! cant wait!!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much it means a lot to me that you like it so much.
Thank you for reviewing.
TheGirlOnFirexx

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Hi! It's me... I'm slightly missing Candii and Skyler, but I think this still has a lot of potential. My only problem is that I'm going to be thinking "wait, isn't her name Skyler" for about two more chapters but oh well! I still love it and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. i can safely say Candii will still be making appearances but Sky is gone. keep reading.

TheGirlOnFirexx

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