{reviewid: 2791466, reviewer: 'naflower05'}
10th June 2013:
good couple of chapters! I wonder if she's gonna keep the internship or give it up. Update again soon please! =]
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I appreciate it! I am working on the next chap now :)
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{reviewid: 2790188, reviewer: 'SiriusGal'}
2nd June 2013:
Great chapter! I loved the scene in the Gryffindor boy's room...it was brillant, I don't think I even really knew what exploding snap was until that scene.
Also, I just noticed that all your chapter titles are songs--right? That's really clever!
Anyway, I can't wait for another update! I love the way you portray Sirius and I love Aubrey. Their scenes together are really great and funny too. Loved it!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad that you thought so.
Yes! They are song titles, and I tried to pick good breakup songs, (like Kelly Clarkson, lol).
I'm glad that you like the story and the characters!! It means a lot to me. I'm working on the next chapter now and hopefully it will be up soon!
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{reviewid: 2789539, reviewer: 'Potter_is_life'}
29th May 2013:
OMG I LOVE IT! The story line is so cute and you totally got th characters down pat :) can't wait untill the next chapter!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! I'm glad that you thought so and thank you for taking the time to read and review :) I should be posting the new chapter tonight!
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{reviewid: 2789388, reviewer: 'willow1'}
28th May 2013:
this is amazing, i love the way that aubrey has so many different sides to her and it is over all good writing. The story is also incredibly funny and well thought out, it is a story that you could write a good thoughtful essay on in an hour because there are so many wonderful quotes. The story is also very climactic and fun to read, it somewhat mimics the style of JK Rowling herself. The dialogue throughout the story and especially Aubry and Sirius's give and take is very realistic and it feels like you can almost hear the character saying it, and every character speaks differently. A lot of writers write every character's speaking pattern and voice the same but you really don't. Another great thing about the story is how it draws the audience in, it makes you feel like you are there and you are a part of the Hogwarts community. You can taste the pumpkin juice at breakfast and feel your hand aching from writing "I hate Sebastian Silver" one thousand times. It has been a pleasure to read and I am sorry if I am being repetitive, yours
-Willow
Author's Response: So first of all, I just want to thank you for probably the most thoughtful and nicest review I've received. It means a lot to me that you took the time to not only read my story but also leave me such a thought out review. Being compared to JK Rowling is a huge compliment! :) Also, I was suffering a little writer's block getting out the next chapter, and reading this review has helped me push through it. So thank you,THANK YOU, for the review. It made my day :)
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{reviewid: 2787755, reviewer: 'SiriusGal'}
19th May 2013:
Another fantastic chapter! I really do love the portrayal of Sirius in this story, I love how we see more to him, and he even has a secret hideout--so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it!! Thank you for the review! :)
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{reviewid: 2787565, reviewer: 'Lucy'}
18th May 2013:
I just wanted to say that im enjoying this story immensely that I hope you keep writing it. Sirius is exactly how I would imagine him to be at that age, you are doing a great job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I really appreciate the comment! I can only hope I'm doing Sirius justice :)
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{reviewid: 2787554, reviewer: 'merlins%20beard'}
18th May 2013:
I just love it. I started reading tonight and i just couldn't stop. I like your writing style very much and i like the story (i love romantic storys)... i'm really looking forward to read more
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! That means a lot to me :) I'm working on the next chapter now. Hopefully it will be up soon!
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{reviewid: 2787553, reviewer: 'shewhomustnotbenamed_'}
18th May 2013:
Loved it! can't wait for the next chapter and aww Sirius and Aubrey it's adorable. Anyway great story, please update soon (:
Author's Response: Thank you for reading an taking time to leave a review! It means a lot to me :)
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{reviewid: 2787282, reviewer: 'Bekah'}
16th May 2013:
another great chapter! love the way the story is going, can't wait for the next one. :)
Author's Response: Thank you Bekah! I appreciate the reviews :)
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{reviewid: 2787171, reviewer: 'Ali'}
16th May 2013:
Sirius made it sound as though he was in love with her. Haha. Good job by the way! Love your story.
Author's Response: Hmm.lol. Thank you for reading and leaving a review! I really appreciate it!
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{reviewid: 2787125, reviewer: 'SiriusGal'}
15th May 2013:
I love the way you portray Sirius! And I loved the detention scene, I was smiling the whole time! Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aw yay! I'm glad I'm doing Sirius justice :) thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it!!
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{reviewid: 2786359, reviewer: 'bekah'}
12th May 2013:
I'm going to cry this story is so good please update soon !!!
Author's Response: Thank you! The new chapter is up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2786234, reviewer: 'Porscha'}
11th May 2013:
Amazing story ! I love this story I can definatly see Sirius doing that :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I can only hope I am doing Sirius justice, lol. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2785909, reviewer: 'S_BERDOG_B'}
9th May 2013:
love it! Update again soon.
Love Bear
Author's Response: the new chapter is up! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
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{reviewid: 2785877, reviewer: 'rich_blonde%20marauder23'}
9th May 2013:
Wow that was a quick update! Update more and moaarr! Nice chapter though, can't wait to see what happens next!
xxx
Sofia
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chap now so hopefully soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2785850, reviewer: 'naflower05'}
8th May 2013:
good story so far! I really like it! I hope she starts to play the piano again! Sirius is so funny! Update again soon! =]
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! I just hope I'm doing Sirius justice lol :) thanks for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2785112, reviewer: 'S_BERDOG_B'}
4th May 2013:
Keep the chapters coming please. I can't wait to read more about Sirius and Aubrey. I thought Sirius staying with Aubrey cause she didn't want to be alone was really sweet.
Love Bear
Author's Response: Will do! Thank you for reviewing!! :)
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{reviewid: 2785067, reviewer: 'theinfamouspotter'}
4th May 2013:
soo god please write more !!! :)
Author's Response: I'm working on it now :) thank you for the review!
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{reviewid: 2785020, reviewer: 'theinfamouspotter'}
4th May 2013:
This is so good!! Pls right more???:(
Author's Response: Just did! :) Thanks for the review!!
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{reviewid: 2685096, reviewer: 'Green_Eyed_Doe'}
13th April 2012:
Your such a good writer! I wish you would update!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2678230, reviewer: 'Green_Eyed_Doe'}
28th March 2012:
so.I really want to read another chapter =)
Author's Response: I've updated! Thank you for reading!
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{reviewid: 2675520, reviewer: 'rich_blonde%20marauder23'}
21st March 2012:
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next and I actually find this story quite funny, so please update because I want to read more! And more! And more! And... you get the gist.
10/10
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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{reviewid: 2669407, reviewer: 'S_BERDOG_B'}
7th March 2012:
I love this chapter!
Author's Response: thank you! im glad you liked it!! thank you for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2669351, reviewer: 'Green_Eyed_Doe'}
7th March 2012:
I really like you story! That you add in the early years so we can see them mature. very cool! I hope this year goes by slower! I wanna read lots more chapters!
Author's Response: haha dont worry there will be lotsmore seventh year chapters to come! thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2667877, reviewer: 'littlemissmb'}
3rd March 2012:
LOL. i like that she stomped on his foot with her high heel. Very mature lol. i like it. =]
Author's Response: haha thank you!! glad that you liked it
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