Cliffhanger...I LIKE IT!
(Unless you take another BILLION YEARS to update in which case I will HATE IT)
I've already told you what I think of this chapter, but I'm just reviewing because it's TRADITION, EMILY!!! TRADITION IS ALL WE HAVE!
You probably won't read this anyways as I bet you're on tumblr right now...BETTER MAKE THE MOST OF IT BEFORE YAHOO CLOSE IT DOWN (I'm already planning my killing spree should this happen)
Great chapter, write more soon and I loves you XxX
P.S: UNICORNS ARE REAL! ^_^Author's Response: The wizard cops are seriously gonna come for you if you keep misusing the review box. Well I'm trying to write the next chapter but it keeps SUCKING so no guarantee when it will show up :( BUT THANK YOU FOR THE LOVELY REVIEW AS THEY MAKE ME SMILE! :) xx Report Review
OMG WHY DID YOU DO THAT! I'm going to be daydreaming about it all day wondering what's happened :oAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! Haha, I'm glad you liked it :) I hope you keep reading! xx Report Review
omg i was right! i guessed the dad was james potter. i love your story btw :) Report Review
Aww Emma, awww. :'( Poor thing, I just want to give her a massive hug. *Hugs*
I like that Scorp went into big brother panic mode, "then I convinced him you weren’t dead" - Hehe, I don't know why but it made me giggle.
I really like that Emma spent time with Al, (there really isn't enough him) but I wished she told him how she felt.
James and Alice = yay!! I love these two.
WHAT! How can you leave me hanging like this. EMERALD!!! IS SHE OK, I HATE DRACO RIGHT NOW SO MUCH!
I have to know whether Emma's ok, I really do!!!Seriously cannot wait for the next chappie.
Soph xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for this review! ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter because I wasn't so sure (I never am -_-) but I like writing dramatic chapters :) It makes me really happy to see how you respond to different characters, it really helps me out, so thank you very much! :) xx Report Review
AAASSSDDDFFFGGGHHHJJJKKKLLL WHY WHHY WHYYY??? I LOVE AND HATE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?? omg im THIS close to tears :'( Thanks for the amazing chappy and I reaally hope you update soon :D xxAuthor's Response: NO BECAUSE LIKE YOU JUST MADE MY DAY TWICE IN THE SPACE OF TWO MINUTES. DUDE YOU ARE SO AWESOME. Thank you so much for this review! I'm so glad that you loved it and I'm so glad that you hated it too! ^_^ Dude you're the best. Thanks again! :) xx Report Review
OKAY WHY DOESN'T THIS CHAPTER HAVE MORE REVIEWS?? IT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND THE LAST BIT IS SCARY AND NOW I'M MOVING ON TO CHAPPY 14 'CAUSE I BLOODY ADORE THIS STORY TO PIECES!!!Author's Response: I bloody adore you to pieces, you seriously make my day every time, thank you so much! :) Please leave a review 'cause it just got validated and I'm not sure about it and your opinion is valuable to me! Thank you thank you thank you for this review! ^_^ xx Report Review
Thank you for mentioning me but I was wondering if I could be part of the story and be a character it would mean so much to me and if it is possible I couldn't thank you enoughAuthor's Response: I'll see what I can do, but it might take a while to find somewhere to introduce a character with your name. I'll think about it. Please don't be offended if I find a slot for like a... whore or I don't know... baby murderer... and use your name there (I'm not planning to murder any babies for the record)
Thank you for the review :) x Report Review
I must say, what i have read so far is actually really good. I was expecting terrible grammar or spelling or something along those lines, as you find in many other stories. However I have been pleasantly surprised. Thank you very much and keep up the good work! :D:D:D:DAuthor's Response: Hi! Thank you for the review :) I'm glad you're enjoying it :) My spelling and grammar isn't the greatest but I do try, I'm sorry if you come across any mistakes I haven't picked up on/edited yet. Thanks again for the review :) xx Report Review
SO MANY FEELS
Hello. Tis me again.
That's right, there's no way you're gonna have a single chapter without a review from you favorite psychopath from now on.
This was amazing..the suspense, the emotion, and just...EVERYTHING! The pure epicness of this chapter made up for the lack of Emma's reaction.
IF YOU WAIT THAT LONG TO UPDATE AGAIN THEN...
NO MORE TAYLOR MOMSON FOR YOU!!!
I MEAN IT!
...love you XxXAuthor's Response: HELLO :) Thank you very much for this review! ^_^ I do hope you know how much of a freak you sound like to anyone else who sees your reviews :) I'm really glad you liked it! I'll try and be quicker next time but I can't promise. Thanks again :D xx Report Review
I love this chapter! I kept smiling all the time!
James and Alice are finally together! I've been waiting for this for so long! (I really like Alice. She deserves to be happy. Now, I like James, too).
I've always loved Neville. I think you portrayed him really well. It's easy to believe that he would be that way, after reading the books.
I'm worried about that note, though. I believe it's from Draco (like she thought). I wonder if Scorpious got a letter, too, and how he'll react.
Great chapter! Please, update as soon a you can
InesAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for this review! ^_^ I'm happy that you are happy with that :) I'm so glad, I was worried that I wasn't portraying him well, but I think Neville's so compassionate that I'd hope he'd be this kind of headmaster, and I think he could be :) I'll do my best :D Thank you SO much for the review, they make my day! :) xx Report Review
Aww Maisy is adorable!!
N'awww Neville, is so asdfghjkl. His speech to Emerald, aww.
ASDFGHJJKLASFDGHJK! THIS CHAPTER OHMYGOD!!!
I can't believe James knows and how calmly he took it. And that he's always loved Alice!! Jalice for ever!!! ♥ ♥
"Albus that Maisy was his nephew" - Think you mean niece not nephew :)
I can't wait for the next one, is Draco really coming back?? Please say he doesn't Emmy and Scorp are happy, Maisy, James and Alice are a little family and it's all perfect!
Soph x :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for this review ^_^ I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thanks, I didn't see that, haha, I have to concentrate better o_O Your reviews always make my day :) Thanks again! :) xx Report Review
dude say what now! GIRL THIS JUST GOT REAL!!! love it!Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :D Thanks for the review! :) xx Report Review
I thought James was the dad! Yey! It doesn't look like this has anything to do with Alice's friend (sorry I've somehow forgotten her name) at the moment which I'm very glad about. This was a really good chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Sorry I haven't read and reviewed this chapter earlier, I just hadn't found the time to review in the last couple of days.
All in all this was a brilliant read and I really hope James is okay about everything and that he still likes Alice because I'm afraid if he isn't there may be more than my heart that's broken! I'm just sad about the lack of Al in this chapter and I really hope there's some more of him next time!
10/10! Well done! xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for this review! ^_^ This made me smile a lot :) So glad you're enjoying it :) I will try to fit more Al into the next chapter but I can't promise :( Still, I'll try my best! Thank you :) xx Report Review
WHAT. THE. HELL!
Okay, update NOW please please please I NEED TO KNOW!
BTW you are an amazing writer.
KTHXBIAuthor's Response: Your enthusiasm makes me smile :D Thank you :) I'll try to update as quick as I can but I'm not sure how long it will take. Thanks for the review :) xx Report Review
Can you please please mention me in the next chapter if not in the story then in A/N my name is Olivia Webster it would mean so much to me thank you xxxAuthor's Response: I guess I can try :) Hope you're enjoying the story :) Thanks for the review :) xx Report Review
oh my gawd I KNEW IT!! I did okay? I knew it would be a Wotter, and for some reason, James just popped into my mind and just tadah!! hehe Drama drama drama intense intense intense, love this story to little tiny minuscule bits! Oh and I love you for creating it! :D xx
1000/1000Author's Response: And I love you for your enthusiasm and encouragement :D You are amazing :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it :) Thank you so much for the review and all the other ones because they all make me smile... a LOT ^_^ Thanks :) xx Report Review
The summary for this chapter, OHMYGOD. I THOUGHT FOR A MOMENT THAT ALICE WAS DEAD. SO GLAD SHE ISN'T!
I was right about James being Maisy's dad. I'm really, really excited for the next chapter to see Emma's reaction as well as her telling James and what his reaction will be.
I'm also really, really excited to see if James and Alice get together and how their relationship will play out especially if Alice is a muggle.
It'll be interesting to see how James reacts and if he'll take to father hood easily. I can't wait to see Harry and Ginny's reactions. My bet is Ginny will probably hit him and ask him why he didn't tell her sooner. :)
I lvoe this chapter so much!!
Soph xx :DAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much for this review! ^_^ You just made my day :D I had high hopes that the summary would crush peoples' souls so I'm really happy that worked out ^_^ Thanks for the review, I'm really glad you're enjoying the story :) xx Report Review
I knew it! I'm so glad that James is the father! I don't know what he'll do when he finds out about the baby, but I don't think it will be bad. And now, we don't have to worry about Maisy being alone anymore. She has the whole Potter/Weasley family to look after her (as soon as they find out). She'll never be alone, even if something happens to Alice or the Malfoys :)
I like this chapter. I'm not worried anymore :)
Just wondering: will Louise appear at some point in this history?
InesAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you seem to care for the characters so much, your review has made my day :) I'm so, so happy you liked it because I wasn't so sure about it. So far I haven't seen Louise as a very important part of the plot, but that could definitely change as I write the story. I'm not really sure what I want for her yet, but I think she'll be mentioned more in the future, whether or not she's mentioned in the past. We'll just have to see :) Thank you so much for the review :) xx Report Review
OH MY GOD THE FEELS!
JUST THE FREAKING CHAPTER DESCRIPTION HAD ME SPAZZING AND THEN THE FIRST FEW PARAGRAPHS, IT'S LIKE OH MY GOD YOU KNOW YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO SCREW WITH ME LIKE THAT YOU KNOW HOW MUCH OF A FANGIRL I AM.. JUST...HOLY JESUS ON A BICYCLE.
P.S:It wasn't badly written AT ALL.Author's Response: Thank you for the review ^_^ I'm very glad you liked it :) BUT DUDE SERIOUSLY. KEEP THE REVIEWS PG, OKAY? I'm very happy that I managed to freak you out :D Thanks again for the review :) xx Report Review
Finished all chapters up and it's brill! Just wondering what house they are all in as you have mentioned they are in slytherin and gryffindor? Can't wait for an update! :)Author's Response: When I originally wrote it they were in Slytherin, but I edited it so they're in Gryffindor because it makes more sense, I just haven't gotten rid of everywhere it says 'Slytherin' but I'm working on it, I'm really sorry :( I'm so glad you like it though! I hope you keep reading! :) Thank you for the review! xx Report Review
Just finished the third chapter and can I just say I am dieing of cuteness right here! Danny and Em are adorable and this is really funny!Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm sorry if you come across any mistakes, I'm not done editing yet so there might be some confusion, but I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :) xx Report Review
I love this story!
By the way, I don't mind long chapters. I would never mind having more of this story to read! It's just amazing! PLEASE update soon. I really need to know what happened to Alice! Is it related to her friend Louise? I hope it isn't. She could use a friend outside Hogwarts.
Great story! (sorry if my English isn't good. It's not my native language)
P.S. I think that James is the father.Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! ^_^ Haha, I'll try not to keep you waiting for too long :) Your English is wonderful! :D Ah, well we shall see ;) Thanks again for the review! xx Report Review
I'm really confused are they in griffendor or Slytherin?Author's Response: Yeah I'm sorry about that :( The characters were in Slytherin but I changed the story and moved them into Gryffindor because I thought it fit their personalities better, so there are some mistakes I haven't edited yet :( Sorry for confusion! :) xx Report Review
I love you too rain! :) This story is amazing, I'm serious okay! It has just the right smount of ufnny, teenage drama, family problems, angst and cliffhangers! Oh my merlin that cliffie! WHAT HAPPENED TO ALICE?? You'd better update soon young lady (wait are you a guy? somehow I doubt it, but I'm just checkin ;)) or there will be SERIOUS consequences. Love you! xx
1000/1000Author's Response: This review is amazing, thank you so much! ^_^ I will try to update quickly this time and yes I am a girl (though my friends would try and tell you otherwise -_-). Thank you for the review! :) xx Report Review
I love this chapter, it may be my favorite yet ^_^
If you've done something awful to Alice, I WILL KILL YOU.Author's Response: Just wanted to see if I could kill you with the fangirl excitement ;) Thank you so much for the review! ^_^ I have no doubt you will :) Thank you thank you thank you for reviewing :) xx Report Review
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