Really liked the whole story. I can only hope James doesn't do something stupid and jeopardise everything.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Well we'll see... :) Report Review
I like this chapter, it's very well written :). I like how James is a godfatherAuthor's Response: fank you :))) Report Review
first off all i'm really happy that you update very quickly, really you seem the only awesome writer here that does that :D i love the relationship between James and summer, they are so fun and sweet together :) i hate zach but it is good that he is in the story, other wise he could get her to soon and that would be lame, what's life without a little excitement?
is james a gryffindor? i hope so and if he is why was he afraid of the blond manly barbie? ok maybe he is big and muscular but james is fucking james sirius potter, he could easly beat that loser with his super awesomeness!!
so really good story, keep updating,
greetings from belgium
ps: i love Ginny in this chapterAuthor's Response: awh, thank you :) ahha! well i'm trying because once april comes i'm going to have to start studying for my final exams, but they'll be over my mid-may and i'll update again immediately :)
yes, exactly, it's imperative that Zach be in the story, and many more things will arise, you'll see. :)
Yes, of course he's a Gryffindor. He isn't necessarily afraid of Zach, he's afraid of the implications of how he feels about Summer. She has a boyfriend and while he likes her, it's not his place to try and break them up or to try and get her to cheat on Zach with him. So he gulped when he saw Zach because he didn't want to be that guy, or be seen as that guy. James is an honourable bloke, like his namesake, and even though he likes Summer, it doesn't mean his type of personality is going to change. So he was scared in that moment of the person he could be perceived as. (And I suppose a little bit about being beaten up. I think even the bravest man alive would be a little scared being held up by the scruff of their shirt!!)
Thank you so much :) I love Ginny too! x
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT THE PLAN IS!!! update soon! I want to read more!!Author's Response: mwahahaha :) you will know very soon! I'm putting the next chapter in the queue in the next couple of days :) x Report Review
really good, i liked summer before, but less now. really mean how she handled the situation. hope the next chapter is out soon. xxAuthor's Response: thank you :) She'll get better, don't worry. xx Report Review
Oh dear...Freddie has a plan! Something tells me it's not going to go smoothly like the probably imagines! Lol When Summer talked about how in love she was with Zach my heart broke for James, as dumb as that sounds. She needs to break it off with him and be with James! Also, I already can't wait until she knows he's a wizard! I'm eager to know how she takes the news! Lol Great job...I need chapter 6! Please hurry! (:
10/10Author's Response: Hahaha! Of course it won't, it's Freddie. I love his character.
Me too :( But we'll see how it pans out!! This story - kinda predictable, but I love writing it anyway!
I'm writing it as we speak :) I'll probably put it in the queue within the next few days. x Report Review
I really liked this chapter! That's so sad about her dad :'(. I really felt the emotions in this chapter, I was genuinely sad! I'm glad I was wrong about why she was upset. It was sweet about him bringing her up! Three stories?! DANG! Lol Well, I'm not sure if she's gonna let that wand comment go! Is James' cover blown? Well, great job, on to chapter 5!: D
10/10Author's Response: Oh, me too. I was so upset writing this chapter. Haha, we'll see how long James manages to maintain his cover, he's hardly the inconspicuous type.
Thank you so much! x Report Review
They were watching the Lion King! I was so happy when you said a monkey held up a lion cub..I just adore that movie!! Lol This was a really good chapter! I really want to know what was wrong with Summer! I don't care for her boyfriend. I already dislike him. But, that's probably just because I want her and James together! I liked the Fred videoing it part! I laughed! Lol I think there's something wrong in her relationship..is Zach abusive? That's just the vibe I get, hope I'm wrong because that'd be sad for her! Lol Great story! :D
10/10Author's Response: oh the lion king is my favourite disney movie (: unfortunately, I have to remove that part from the story as hpff doesn't allow you to mention things to do with disney :( sad days.
Haha, Fred will have a lot more of his antics to come, don't you worry!!!
And no, Zach isn't abusive. The idea ran through my mind at one point, but it just didn't work with the rest of the story.
Thank you! x Report Review
Well, I personally think you've portrayed him pretty dang fantastically! I love the way his brain acts! Wow..that sounds weird :p Lol But I really like his brain, like, telling him to ring the doorbell and everything. That was funny! I don't see him giving up on Summer...I already want her to dump Zach and be with James! Is that ridiculous? Lol Another great chapter! I'm seriously impressed! :D
10/10Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you think so. Haha! I know what you mean, I felt he might be a little too girly, but oh well :) he can deal with it. Thank you! x Report Review
Wow..this was one of the best 'Chapter 1's' I've read in a while! It was extremely interesting, and the idea of James falling in love with a muggle is a bit exciting! (: Your characters and plot is brilliant and I adored the Oompa Loompa aspect of the story! I'm on to chapter 2! :D
10/10 (:Author's Response: awh! thank you so much!!! :) I just love the idea of James falling in love with a muggle :D makes me happy. Report Review
BANG! lol, I really like this, so am so happy when I see you updated!
Please update soon xAuthor's Response: haha :D awh thank you so much :) i will! x Report Review
It's not mere facade, we are in fact giant pillars, creating stability for this world, we are MEN. We are swift as a coursing river, with all the force of a great typhoon, with all the strength of a raging fire.mysterious as the dark side of the moon. :D.Author's Response: ha ha ha. :) yes, yes. you are so manly ;) Report Review
Really good! I like how this story is heading! Can not wait for more!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much (: x Report Review
I thought the boyfriend was Zack.little confused... hope to see more of this :)Author's Response: OH! my bad!! I've changed that now, his name is Zach! thanks for noticing, must have slipped my mind! :) thank you! x Report Review
-_- seriously everyone has to be muscly!? and it just HAD to be lion king?!? -_-.. hahah well I can't wait for the next chapter :).Author's Response: hahahha! ;) yes of course it had to be lion king! what else would it be?! :) xx Report Review
:) I love it, and before I go to sleep I've got to read chapter 3. ;D. seems only fair!! Can't leave myself wondering :D!Author's Response: ((: yay!!! x Report Review
Love the character of Freddie especially! update soon xAuthor's Response: Awh Thanks! He's my favourite too :) Report Review
I love the way James feels about Summer! The beginning scene was my favorite part of the chapter. I'm really interested to learn more about her. I hope you continue with this story, 10/10 :DAuthor's Response: I know! He's so cute (: Thanks! The next chapter is already in the queue! x Report Review
I really like Summer, she seems awesome! I can't wait to read about what happens between them in the next few chapters. 10/10 :)xxAuthor's Response: Thank you :) xx Report Review
I loved this chapter, I thought it was a good start to the story. I'm excited to see James the mystery girl start talking in the next chapter (hopefully?). Fred is probably my favorite character, he seems like he'll be a cool guy. 10/10 :)Author's Response: awh thank you so much ((: I love Fred too, don't worry he'll definitely be appearing in later chapters. x Report Review
aw this is really sweet in a weird way- and i'm not really one for sweet, prissy things (my own stories prove as mch :')) keep writing :DAuthor's Response: awh thanks :) Report Review
this is pretty good :) i like te references to charlie and the chocolate factory too XDAuthor's Response: thank you! haha! the oompa loompa reference is definitely my favourite :) Report Review
awww I LOVE this fic!
You write James really well!
Please update soon :D
xxxAuthor's Response: thank you :) i will! Report Review
I like it :D! yay it's relaly good :). but now you have to make more, and then more, and then more and more and more aspoeihfaposiefho. and then what? then you'll be super busy doing well at all those nice ass schools it TOLD you you'd get into.Author's Response: hehehe :) Report Review
this seems like a begin to a very good story :)
i'm already exited, its's fun! especially fred haha
so keep updating!
greetings from belgiumAuthor's Response: awh thank you so much :) well the next story is already in the queue!! x Report Review
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