Mk... Meghna. I love you work so continue with okay? Alright now I need to tell you something- Because I am a loser I shall have to tell you- Volde-mart... Disney term. Saw it on a show... I dont know what you could change it to and sorry for beeing a bleeding-tosser-of-a-prick... BUT I think you will appricate hearing this because they (as a big corperation that does not care for the creative litterary process) could technically sue you unless you have proof you wrote it first. (Bummer Trrrust me I know)
Your quality of a story though is magnificent and I want you to know... Please dont yell at my sorry rump but my cc will prevent any possible lawsuit...
pllleasse dont hate me.. :(
LLGAuthor's Response: I'm not claiming it as my own, dear. Nor am I saying I came up with it before Disney did. But thank you, I appreciate the concern, and I'm glad you'd like me to keep writing :) Report Review
Your fanfiction is far from semi-decent.. Its great!!! Don't set up deadlines your not a thousand percent sure you will make in the future though- trust me all it does is make you feel overwelmed.
i LOVE the Grim and Bagger duo!
I give you the highest praise a cyber reader can give *inserted drumroll* a cyber cupcake!
LLGAuthor's Response: Yes, what's that Douglas Adams quote about deadlines? One of the best quotes ever. Thank you so much, and for the cupcake as well! Report Review
Another Marviolous chapter! I do love your story and its plot line- Dont EVER doubt your work.. btw I LOVE suggary foods! I will be reading your next chapter with some blue cottoncandy! Yum! And sorry I dont think I want to peel my eyes like a potato- Bio teacher had a model of the human eye *ew* and not to mention it would be painful lol...
LLGAuthor's Response: Sugary food for the win lol. Thank you so much LLG, it means heaps that you have taken the time to leave reviews after every little chapter ^-^ Thank you so, so much! Report Review
This is another stupendious chapter and I am so excited to see whats going to happen next... I like how it seems like the pair is taking karma into there own hands... Oh and I believe fighting fire with fire- or water Xp Only because it extinguishes it..
LLGAuthor's Response: You are precious, do you know that? Thank you so much, it means a ton! Report Review
Another lovely chappie dear.. :)
LLGAuthor's Response: Thank you xx Report Review
Nice and lovely chapter two... Interested in your plans- have to be since I'm up at two am reading this.
LLGAuthor's Response: I am honoured that you're putting finishing this chapter before sleep. I SALUTE YOU. Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it so far! Report Review
WOOOW. This is quite a chapter chicky- almost like a revenge-of-the-fallen-nerds-and-social-outcasts story which I adore- I almost have a dislike for the fire-with-fire approach; but each to their own... Shall read and review more later..
LLGAuthor's Response: Haha thank you! I'm actually a huge advocate of the fight fire with fire approach, but you're right. Everybody looks at things differently. Thank you soo much LLG! Report Review
WOW. I really feel bad for Audrey... Glad she found a friend and love how she hates the drama and bull*cesored* like I do... cant wait to read more after some much loved sleep..
LLGAuthor's Response: Well, things like this happen in real life all the time, don't they? I am rather glad too that she's got Hugo. It will make her life much easier (: Thank you for taking the time to review! Report Review
'Weasley is doing better than me in Potions. Is it drugs, you think?' hahaHA. GOD.
'well then, hello and goodbye, audrey bloom.' i literally love this line so much even though roger said it? help? i actually kind of feel bad for him, in a stupid way. poor guy doesn't know what's coming for him.
WAIT YOU'RE UNHAPPY WITH WHAT YOU HAVE SO FAR? well ok i'm here to tell you that you don't need to be, at all, period. ok? ok.
i'm going to cry reading the last chapter, probably. i don't want it to end. i really don't.Author's Response: I wish you'd stop. I can't take it anymore!
NOO DON'T YOU DARE FEEL BAD FOR ROGER. Though tbh so am I lol #fail. And yes I am ): This was one of the better ones because I did a lot of tweaking with respect to the writing in general. Seriously, go back to the first chapter. It is the w o r s t. But welp thanks so much you fabulous human! Report Review
cheese, wine, and pointed noses. CRYING.
i think this chapter has the best banter between hugo and audrey yet, to be honest. grim and badger. silently weeping. the whole scene with them on the train playing exploding snap made my heart hurt.
teddy is one of my favorite characters (lol idk idk) and i loved the way you described him, oh god. and he's a writer. bless you.
you've managed to make these characters so real and believable, and i'm really going to miss this story when it's finished, i'm realizing. you're such a great writer, meghna. never stop.Author's Response: B-but it's true!
Oh wow thanks so much ;A; i have to admit that I am mildly pleased with the whole idea of ~Grim and Badger, but nothing further lol. And if this was a movie, Teddy would have less than 5 minutes of screen time! How on earth is he your favourite?! But I appreciate it and re:last part PRINTING IT OUT AND PUTTING IT ALL OVER MY WALLS dear god ily Report Review
i loved the entire part with mcgonagall. oh hugo. you witty, witty soul. and this line: 'I have a party hat in my trunk somewhere,' he rationed and I glared at him.' dani = dead.Author's Response: Profusely keysmashes.
I LOVE YOU DANI oh god. Only you could make me feel good about writing a rubbish chapter :3 Report Review
Why has this ONLY got 30 favouriters? Its so damn good! I can't wait till Davies gets a punch in the face (metaphorically of course, hugos already done the real thing;)) by Grim and Badger. Update and till then I am going to hibernate:PAuthor's Response: I DON'T KNOW MAYBE BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW HOW TO DEVELOP PLOT ;A; welp thank you so very much, it means the world! and yes, i can't wait either haha. i have half of the next chapter written down JUST GIMME SOME TIME it'll be up soon promise! Report Review
Oh, you silly goose. This chapter is just as good as the other ones, if not even better. :)
Davies is starting to turn on his charm, isn't he? It's a complete 360 from the way he treated her at the beginning. I can't wait til he gets his comeuppance!!
"Voldemart"?! Bahahahaha!! Did you make that up? I would love to see one of those in real life. :)
How many chapters is the story going to be?! I was hoping it would be quite long, so that the magic didn't have to end so soon! Maybe when you finish, you could write a sequel? *puppy dog eyes*
Anyways, much love for updating, and update again when you can!! ;)Author's Response: *hugs* thank you so much! I'm alright with how this turned out, because I wrote one draft (all conversation, barely any descriptive paragraphs) and then started filling it in so that it wasn't just a heap of one-liners. As for Voldemart, I'm not entirely sure about this, but I was stalking the city of London on google maps and I think I saw a store or something called Voldemart? Or I came up with it somehow but either way. Let's say it exists XD And so would I!
As for the number of chapters -- I can't put a finger on it at the moment. I'm going to say there'll be at least another four or five, because I want to write more about the Davies-Audrey "friendship", their NEWTs (which I know seems like the least interesting thing to read about at the moment, given the circumstances) and want to discuss Hugo and Audrey's future plans a bit more as well. So I think you can expect another 5-ish chapters.
Oh ignore Davies. He'll get what he deserves ;) Thank you so much for this lovely review, dear! Report Review
I love this story, it totally deserves at least thirty favourites! Hugo and Audrey are awesome and I love the relationship between them and how honest they are with each other. Grim and Badger - I love how they are now terrorising the whole school and no one suspects them, that was a great touch. Cannot wait to see where this is going so please update soon!
GirlOnTheSidelines.Author's Response: Oh gosh, thanks so much! And haha terrorizing the school is something I've always wanted to do myself, and I'm rather proud of Hugo and Audrey for managing to do it. It's true that the best part is that they can use their dorkiness to not even be suspected, let alone ever accused or found out. I promise I will update as soon as humanly possible! Thank you! Report Review
WHY U HAVE SUCH GOOD IDEAS? I love the whole basis of this story, let alone the witty humour and reality of it all. The girl isn't perfect looks wise and it makes the whole thing glitter with realism hidden in between the magic.:) this is the only story I'm following with less than 5 chapters so go go go and update! Till then I'll just imagine the next part in my head;)Author's Response: GOOD IDEAS what pshhh nothing of the sort around here. But thank you so much, this is one of the cutest reviews I've got :') NOW I FEEL TERRIBLE FOR NOT UPDATING. *scrambles* Report Review
sorry i havent reviewed in a while.
i havent reviewed anyone in a while - -
but i loved this chapter xD
its weird getting used to the idea that rose is younger than hugo but its funny xD
how rose doesnt believe hugo has friends
and how she's like. i cant believe hugo's got a GIRLFRIEND.
ah i love the weasleys lolll
it looks like her transformation plan IS going well!
THATS GOOD! loll
everyone who sees her is going to be so shocked lolAuthor's Response: That's perfectly okay if you're going to leave wonderful reviews like this every now and then :D And lol Rose being younger than Hugo was actually a mistake - but then I decided to just leave it be and let him be the older one. Though I want to write another story with Rose as the older sibling xD BUT thanks so much! And yes, the plan is going well so far. Do keep reading (: Report Review
This story just keeps getting better every time I read it. :)
The way you introduce characters, revealing their personalities through their actions, is so much more fun to read than "This is Teddy Lupin. He is fit and likes Quidditch.". I love it!
Also, you have a pretty great sense of humor, as evidenced in this chapter.
"I don't know why people associate romance to France. I associate it with cheese, wine, and pointed noses."
Audrey is hilarious, and so very unique.
One thing (and this is sooo nitpicky, but I just wanted to mention it) that I was a little iffy about was Dom's accent in the very short sentence she spoke in the middle of a paragraph. (Super picky, right?)
To me, she sounded a bit like Viktor Krum, who is Bulgarian. It wasn't a big deal, and if you think it sounds like French, then who am I to argue?!
I'm probably wrong anyways. :)
So, in conclusion, you're a wonderful writer and your characters are wonderful, and everything is just... Wonderful. :)
Write like the wind, so that I can read your next chapter! :DAuthor's Response: Aww thank you! Lol the France thing is actually a personal opinion XD And you're right about the accent - I thought so too when I wrote it down (and said it aloud about fifty times) but I can't be arsed with changing it at the moment. Not nitpicky at all! Akjashjasd thank you so much you wonderful person! I will try and update as soon as possible (: Report Review
Your characters are all so well-rounded and interesting. I love that Teddy is a playwrite - so different to how he's normally written!
Audrey and Hugo's friendship is progressing nicely. I feel like it's so soon to be going to Christmas at one's house after just two weeks, but when they've only got each other, I guess there's an exception?
It's such a shame that Audrey's losing weight though. Adds a great element to the plot, but I hate society these days (and in the future!) :/ she was happy as she was before!
Anyway time to stop rambling. Lovely writing as per usual :)Author's Response: Woah, thanks so much! Well-rounded? Really? That's pretty much the only thing I strive for when writing fanfic because I know I'm rubbish at other things like plot and writing etc. So I'm glad you think so :D And yes, absolutely. Audrey's mother was right about Hugo being very forward about asking her to a christmas dinner after knowing her for such little time. But oh well.
Well, she's losing weight to get back at one of the tossers, not so that Hugo will like her or that she'll become popular or anything. This is still very much a social justice-centred fic and I intend on keeping it that way!
Thanks so much for the reviews (: Report Review
I hate to be the party pooper, but there is a typo in the very first sentence that distracts from the general awesomeness that is this chapter.
I love that she's different. It's easy to take the pretty girl and make a story. Don't see the bigger girls as much. Can't wait to read the rest!Author's Response: Thanks for pointing it out! And yep, I completely agree. Audrey's character is something I can totally relate to, and I think it's because she's so ~normal that people like her. Well, I hope they like her lol. Thanks so much for the reviews, on the other stories as well! And I hope you enjoy reading the rest (: Report Review
This is a really fantastic story so far! :)
Your characters are quite believable and likeable. I really identify with Audrey and I love how she befriended Hugo.
The talking head was terribly insane. It made my day.
Keep updating!!! :DAuthor's Response: Ah, thank you, thank you! Fantastic? Ugh thanks so much haha. And I really try to make Audrey at least as normal as possible, so I'm glad people can identify with her character. Thank you so much, and keep reading! Report Review
Ha, that was hilarious! Excellent :) I just love the shriveled head!
I also love the McGonagall scene. Hugo is an amazing excuse-maker. And I can picture McGonagall pretending not to know and letting them carry on.
I'm super excited for the next chapter! I can't wait to read about the Christmas break. So please update soon for me :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Haha aw I'm glad you liked it. I'll probably reveal at some point what McG was really thinking, and whether she knows it's the two of them or not. But for now, let's just pat Hugo on the back for some fabulous covering up! Thank you so vey much ^__^ Report Review
hi! that was an interesting chapter. It felt like there was a lot progression in the audrey/Hugo relationship- between Hugo's grades going up and Audrey having an emotional breakdown. I especially loved that we got to see Audrey speak up for herself. I love how original the revenge plans you come up with are! I was confused that you kept on referring to Audrey graduating in a month- or taking the NEWTs in a month. Doesn't she still have six months or so left?
Can't wait to read about the hogsmeade trip!Author's Response: I actually feel bad when I get reviews now BECAUSE IT'S SO HARD TO UPDATE. I don't know where my muse has gone, seriously. But thank you so much! It was intentional to make them both do better in their classes, to prove that they make a good team and that they're good influences on each other (: And thank you re: the plans haha. The part where Audrey says she's running out of plans = me. I honestly have no idea where I'm going with them. But I just hope they work! And the NEWTS aren't in a month, but prep will start once they're back from the Christmas holidays. That's what I meant! Again, thank you so much for continually reviewing, it means a whole lot to me! I'M GOING TO WRITE TODAY I SWEAR. Report Review
The only explanation can be that they're weeping from the brilliance after reading, and are incapable of forming coherent sentences to review. So keep at it!!Author's Response: Haha aw I doubt it but thank you so much, I'm glad you like the story and I honestly cannot thank you enough for the gorgeous chapter images! ILY Report Review
WHY AM I SO INVESTED IN THIS STORY AHHH OKAY
1. bloom-weasley enterprises. weep sob choke etc
2. their friendship is just .. so perfect. i've never read fic before with this good of a dynamic. it's incredible.
3. 'that would be an awful waste of a fork, don't you think?' ahaha the sad thing is i can just picture jesse saying this oh god take me away
4. 'there's a giant slug where your heart is!'
5. THE END SENTENCE IS LITERALLY PERFECT, I CAN JUST PICTURE IT. OH GOD.
okay well i ran out of reasons. but um, i just really love this story. i am so thrilled you put up another chapter. i'm so excited for the chapter where they spend christmas together, also. keep it up :')Author's Response: ugh dani i swear your reviews are amazing and i laughed so loudly and my mom was looking at me so weirdly but i really don't care because sdffdjhsjkfd your comment just warms my whole soul and i promise i will update tonight Report Review
'Right? Two unsociable hobos; who'd think we could accomplish something of the sort.'
i love this story SO MUCH it hurts. their friendship is so mismatched and audrey's so cynical and hugo is witty and sharp and deep down just as cynical and their relationship is just so perfect, i can't even stand it.
impatiently waiting for chapter five. until then i guess i'll re-read the entire thing multiple times because it's that good.Author's Response: i love your reviews so much it hurts lol. thank you so so so much, i'm glad you like the story so far! hahaha tbh i like hugo a bit more than audrey. but they do match themselves well together, even though they are, like you said, mismatched. ugh i really want to post chapter 5 but i have just half of it done. i will make it a good one haha. thank you so much once again! Report Review
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