It's only getting better and better! You have to update soon, because I want to know what will happen to Marlene, and how Remus could (kind of) betray Sirius and Dorcas :(

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You almost give me a heart attack when you'd say Sirius and Lily had slept together. Thanx god it wasn't true!!!
Besides that do I really love your story. :D

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uggg the idea of Lily and Snape together is icky.

Author's Response: Snape and Lily aren't together in this...

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I really enjoyed this chapter and these strange dreams are really intriguing! Please update soon ánd I really do love the new story title.

Author's Response: Thank you :) The dreams are a very important point! And thank you, I prefer it! :)

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I'm really interested in where this story is going. Knowing Dorcas' fate make me sad, but I like reading everything that happens before the end.

Author's Response: Oh yes, my ending is already written and it depresses me :/ I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)

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Fantastic chapter. I seriously can't stand Marlene, but Sirius and Dory are just so cute together. Can't wait until you update next (:

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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Yeah!! So so so good. I love Dorcas. She's so great. Please update again soon.

Author's Response: Appreciated so much!

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OMYGOODNESS! I absolutely adore this story! please continue writing it! :D

Author's Response: I will :) thank you very much :)

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Amazing!!! I can't wait until the next chapter :D You're such an amzing writer :)

Author's Response: wow, thank you :)

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Fab, I love that her father is a werewolf!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing all the chapters omg aha :) I'm glad you like it so much, really appreciate it!

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Loved the chapter, its about time they got to kiss!

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LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! I cant believe they got so close to kissing and then James ruined it...

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Aww he was tearing up, that's so sad. I wish he would just grow a pair and tell her how he feels, but i also wish she would look at their friendship closly, I mean honestly they hold hands..

Love it!!

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I loved the chapter, seriously this is a great story!

I loved when Sirius caught Remus and Dorcas hugging and Remus was trying to explain. I really wish Dory would just dump Lockhart and go for Sirius. I really hope you explian more about her connection with that dream she had and why she got them like she did..

Keep up the great work :D

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I loved it they are so adorable! :P

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I loved the chapter, I also love a young Ian as Sirius, i could totally picture him while i was reading :D

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I really like Dory, but it just drives me crazy how she won't ditch Gilderoy. You have an excellent writing style. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, Dory's stupid when it comes to Gilderoy, but don't worry! It'll all be better soon, promise!:)

And thank you very much!

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Hey! I am totally in love with your story! And I cannot wait for future updates! Dorcas and Sirius are so great together! I just hope things don't go wrong because of stupid Lockhart.. Please!! No misunderstandings between Dory and Sirius? They are both so amazing.. Really... Your story is fab!!

Author's Response: thank you very much :)

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Love it!
This was my favorite chapter so far. The story just gets better and better :D

Author's Response: Thank you dear:)

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I like it so far, it's really lovely.

Okay, scratch that.

This story rocks!

I always wondered what the story was behind Dorcas, amongs all the other mentioned characters in the books. It's fascinating; there is an entire world out there, mapped out, people who we aren't even aware of in the story. We only meet whom JK Rowling wants us to, but there is just so much more. I love fanfictions that explore that and I find that yours is really well written and quite intriguing. Good work! I look forward to the next chapter =]

Author's Response: And i enjoy long reviews like this, it makes me happy.

Yes, I had read Marauder fanfics before and many of them had made up their own characters, which is fine, but i thought i should put in characters that were already made, as..well they would be there. And from the moment I read that Voldemort killed Dorcas personally, i was interested to know why she was so important. And so begins my tale.

Thank you very much :)

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excellent work.
keep it going! :D

Author's Response: Thank you my fan;D!

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such a great story! i cannot wait until your next update! its already on the favourites pile!
- Lfg

Author's Response: wow, thank you! It means alot!

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awesome story
you're doing great

Author's Response: thank you :)

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I really like it. And I LOVE the couple, it should be more Sirius/Dorcas storys
I hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: i appreciate this :) thank you! x

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WOW! Please keep writing! This is SO good!!! Up-date soon!! I need to see where this is going!!

Author's Response: aw, thank you! :D

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