Reading Reviews for When the Lines Blur
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Review #1, by Lioness06 The Guilt

2nd June 2014:
Wow! This is a great story! This is a very original idea. I love your characterization of Peter and Dumbledore. Dumbledore is concerned about the bigger picture and not individual Order Member lives. I am excited to see where you take this story.

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! It means a lot to get such a positive response and I'm glad to hear that someone's enjoying it. Hopefully you'll enjoy the last two chapters as well. :)

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Review #2, by ewsoucf7 The Beginning

20th February 2012:
I would never ever read a story like this usually, but I thought why not? I'm very glad that I read this story. I love the twist that Dumbledore asked him to become a spy. That was definitely unexpected. I'd love to continue reading this, so I cannot wait for the next update! =]

Author's Response: Usually I'd never write a story like this, but I'm trying to work on shorts outside of my comfort zone. I'm thrilled you like it!

Thank you so much! I know it's been a long wait, but the next chapter should be up in the next week.

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