I really love this! I think you've got a great writing style and the characters are really interesting. The set up seems really different to a lot of fics, especially how Jenelle and James have already broken up, i'm really intrigued by what happened between them. Can't wait to see what happens next! You should definitely continue! Report Review
I love you. Like this story is so awesomely amazing. Report Review
AMAZING. Just AMAZING.
I'm speechless. CONTINUE!! CONTINUE my dear!! PLEASE!!
will promise to actually really review once i get over my absolute joy over this story. Pinky promise.
Amazing first chapter!!!
- Abhi ♥ Report Review
OMGOSH okay so im coherent now. Nearly. But I just absolutely love this story!! I've been wanting to get on board a new story, and I just came across this one. And jeez. Amazing. Just amazing my dear.
I just love Jen. I love how quirky and hot headed she is. I love her personality. And JAMES. OH GOOD GOD.
Just LOVE. ALL. COMPLETELY.
New favourite favourite story.
- Abhi Report Review
OMGOSH. I'm officially in love with this story. hsadfhbe. Bleurgh.
LOVE. Will stop with the word vomit next chapter GOSH I LOVE YOU.
LOVED IT. PERFECT. ARGH.
- Abhi Report Review
Holyyy...skijdsFJNDfhb hfrBirbdfijdn. Ok. Calm. Ok...
I'm good. For now.
So I found this story today while I was supposed to be paying attention to my AP Bio teacher, but one can only listen to a lecture about gene frequencies for so long.
Anywayyy, I'm really glad I was being a bad student (until the test comes along and I get my butt handed to me...ha) because I found your story. And your story is awesome! Seriously, it's been awhile since I've been this into a story from the very start. I love how it starts somewhat in the middle and the characters are already in the holes they made, if that makes any sense? Let's just say it does.(:
So I really hope you continue with this story because I literally cannot get enough of this hot/cold James, and just. Gah. 0_0
This story gives me so many feels it's not even funny. But you can laugh anyway ^_^.
Please, Please, PLEASE continue with this story and I'll be on the lookout for a new chapter!
Thank you for the feels,
Rosie(; Report Review
This is super amazing. It's so good!
Okay, write more ASAP or I may cry.
Merci :) xxx Report Review
ahh I'm so excited for this next chapter. I really love the story i think it is a really unique idea. Please update soon. I love LUKE Report Review
I love this story! Can't wait for more, update soon! Report Review
hey this is really good and a really original idea.
I think it's uniquely different and can't wait for more, so please update as soon as possible Report Review
I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Report Review
This was really good. I want to read more. I do feel like this was the best chapter out of the ones you wrote. Report Review
ashyyy i love u thank u very much for that!! Report Review
ARGH!!! omg they are sooo awkward! and Merlin you haven't updated in simply ages! I remeber this story from aaages ago! You know, i've never actually hated James before (in a fanfic) but now, ugh, he's a COMPLETE idiot! anyway, yeah that's basically it, oh and your AMAZING!! Report Review
This is such a good story! I love all the character's and the plot is original and I just absolutely love it! Update, update, UPDATE :D
10/10Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I want this story to be extremely original as possible! I'm glad you liked it! :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
I love this story so much!!! (and your other stories even though I haven't commented, but will soon)
And I absolutely love Jenelle and Dom (I can be a bit like Jen/Dom)! Can't wait to learn more about James though.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I look forward to your reviews very much :)
Haha, I feel like everyone can be a bit like them, they're very relatable in some ways, which was what I was going for :P Thanks for the review! Report Review
This was really good too :) Please update soon!Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
Interesting ... I'd like to see what happens next ...Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
I really liked this! Please continue :)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review and I'll definitely continue! :) Report Review
It was good! It would be nice to see how they deal with the whole ordeal. Great idea!Author's Response: Thank you! :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
I just found this story but it is awesome! I finished it and scrolled down but then I realized this was the only chapter up so far :( So I figured since I couldn't go on I'd leave you a review :)
Like I said, I think you did an awesome job on this chapter. I like how you started the story in the middle of the conflict because it makes it way more interesting than if you had started it when she and James were first dating or when they broke up or whatever.
Fred was funny too and Dom not being a saint is nice. I hate when people make their character's pretty, smart, nice, popular, etc. etc. etc. because it's totally unrealistic and it drives me crazy. The way you had Jen think about Morgan seemed really realistic too. Kind of hating her and yet not really sure whether she should or not. I think everyone's gone through that at one point or another.
Anyways, I loved this chapter and I can't wait to read what happens next!
countrymusicfanaticAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you like this story! :D And yes, I wanted Jenny's feelings to be right there, out in the open, so we can see what she's really going through and stuff. I wanted her to be this angsty teenager and I couldn't do that if she was ... er, happy haha.
Haha, I love that you find Fred funny ... I must say, I wasn't sure whether or not it would come across. And yes! I definitely didn't want Dom to be perfect, she's a lot like some of my friends, which isn't bad at all ... it's just the way some people are. And she's not a bad person, otherwise I doubt Jen would be friends with her haha. Yeah, Jen's feelings towards Morgan's are ... almost like what I would feel if the same thing happened to me.
Anyways, thank you so much for this lovely review! They make my day, truly! Report Review
This is a great first chapter, I really want to see where this goes! I think Dom's so hilarious, she sounds like people at my school. But you need to update Lottery too!! Report Review
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