I thought this was super cute :3 It flowed really well too, you have a way with dialogue.
You should make this a short story, I'm itching for more!Author's Response: Oh dear, thank you so much! I fumble and bumble with conversation a great deal and am never quite sure of the flow, so this is very reassuring! And I definitely would like to -- it's just that I have so many one-shot ideas at the moment and a whole load of WIPs to update, so I need to prioritize my writing a bit XD Thank you so much though! Report Review
Do you plan on writing another movement of this unlikely duet?!
I'm really liking the Vinny-Albus dynamic. :)
But seriously, this is fantastic, and it makes me beg for more!
So... Maybe? :}Author's Response: I DON'T KNOW gosh should I? Maybe I will - but I've got 4 WIPs to update already, and probably shouldn't dive into adding more chapters to this one. I prefer leaving it as a one-shot, but maybe I'll do a spin-off some time in the future (: Thank you so much! Report Review
Okay, so this is officially my new favourite next-gen one-shot (: Scratch that, it's probably one of my favourite fics, full stop. It's fluffy and sweet and had me smiling throughout. :3Author's Response: Oh gosh I feel so royally undeserving of this! I am so going to try harder on my fanfiction lol. Thank you so much, it really means heaps, and I'm glad people like the run-of-the-mill rubbish I churn out sometimes XD Thank you once again! Report Review
This was cute! I liked Vinny, she's spunky and not afraid to be herself, something i think all main characters should have! Albus is super adorable. I would love to see where your story is going! Keep writing!
-RavenclawWayToBeAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I haven't written fanfic in ages and I finally managed to get out something I like (: Thanks so much once again! Report Review
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