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Review #1, by Jchrissy Autumn Leaves

12th February 2013:
Hi there! I love a good mystery!

I can't believe how different this Victoire is than usual. It's so awesome to have her as a kick butt kind of personality, and I loved that you were able to use the Rookie to smoothly give us an idea of Victiore's appearance and show us what being a woman in the Auror office took.

I couldn't imagine anyone that followed in Harry and Ron's footsteps really had it easy. Family's loyal, but on the job family is just another worker. And not only that, but it seem Victiore had to go the extra mile to prove herself even more capable than the boys. Or equally as capable.

The kind of speech you've given her... clipped words made for no nonsense, was my favorite part of this chapter. Although I found myself want to see her get all dolled up for a date or something along those lines :P

And she died her natural blonde hair?! It fits what you've shows us of her character so far, but I'm not happy about it. If you've been blessed with that natural gorgeous color of hair, you should be thankful for it. (Coming from a jealous girl who can't get her hair anything lighter than not quite black :P)

I loved the introduction to Teddy and the competition you've created between them. I'm excited to find out what's behind all this!

This was a really awesome first chapter, I look forward to continuing!!

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Review #2, by blackzero Autumn Leaves

29th July 2012:
Honestly there exist a sane writer who writes Teddy/Vic fic without getting Dom pregant.

Brilliant Plot. Superb.

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Review #3, by starryskies55 Autumn Leaves

11th March 2012:
Oh Good Lord. A Victoire/Teddy with no Victoire/Teddy? (yet) This looks amazing.

I love spy-y, Auror sneaky sneaky action stuff, and this is a fantastic first chapter! WOW. What's up between Vic and Ted? What's up with the murdered guy? What's up with Uncle Harry? Wha-?

Muchly intrigued, and your dialogue is funny, your descriptions immense and Vic's slant on everything is superb :D 'We had no need for frills, jewellery or pink.' I already love this Vic, and she's so different to all the other ff's Victoires!


Over and out, SHPFFO :D

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Review #4, by rupertlover Autumn Leaves

17th February 2012:
Wow, I love this start! It is quite different from other fanfic stories, but that's a good thing!! I like how Victoire and Teddy haven't spoken for awhile because you normally find that they are in love and stuff.
This is great, 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it :)

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