This was so good! I absolutely loved it! I definitely have to listen to this song now :)Author's Response: Really? I'm glad you like it! Yeah, you should go listen to the song! It's pretty awesome! Thanks for review! :) Report Review
This was soo cute! I thought the ending was very good, just to let you know! I thought this was a great story for Valentine's day and i think you picked a great song to accompany your story! I thought everything about it was exactly what every girl's dream would be. I loved how you wrote James too! Youre such a good author, keep writing!
-RavenclawWayToBeAuthor's Response: Aww, you're so sweet! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! Honestly, you just made me super happy! Aah, I love you right now. As in really, really right now. Love me too? Haha, well, thanks again!! I really appreciate this. :)) Report Review
Aw, poor James, how could it only be a daydream? Premonition, possibly?
Anyways, it was sweet, and super-cute. I really enjoyed it!
Don't be disappointed or anything, because this is totally great :)
Love your description and dialogue, but my absolute favorite line was
"You're the only person I have the hots for"
Kay, seriously? Did you write that line for the sole purpose of melting the female heart, because it definitely worked. Ohgosh possibly the sweetest thing anyone has ever made James say/think! Ahh, I just can't praise it enough, this story, I love it! Alot!Author's Response: Aww, really?! It doesn't...suck? Haha! Thanks so much!! I really love you right now. DO you know that? No? Well, now you do!! Haha!
But I mean, seriously?! I love that line too. Heh. James should've had the courage to say it to Lily. Haha! But well, thanks again! You really brightened up my day! Report Review
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