Really loved this chapter, though I think the tutor lesson was a bit weird as they gave up on it after about two minutes and doesn't Rose have to have those lessons?
But besides that; Quidditch quidditch quidditch! tee hee, but Rosie is doomed if she hasn't even practised :o
I really like the story plot. While it is more relaxed compared to action-style stories, it still has a good sense of build-up and tension and suspense to it. Also makes me laugh sometimes. :)
-Lizzfizz (9/10)Author's Response: Yep - don't worry. More to come that will be much better than this. :P
YES! Quidditch. I love writing Quidditch. xD Next chapter is in the queue, so if you choose to read on, you'll see if she's doomed or not...
Thanks for that awesome rating. :D Report Review
Hehe: I love next-gen fics to cheer me up :)
So first chapter: I think it was good, though I'm not sure if it needed more of an intro thing, I did quite like the first bit though. I seem to be arguing with myself over this haha. I did like it and while I have the feeling that the Rose/Scorpius is meant to be main, I can't help but focus more on the quidditch myself :) Which is why I liked those parts of the chapter, though you have definitely introduced an interesting situation for Scorpius and Rosie, characters are nice.
One thing: so were Scorpius and Rosie friends or not really because that was all that confused me.
-Lizzfizz (8/10)Author's Response: Hey! :)
I love next-gen too! I've been meaning to write one for a while, so hopefully I'll stick with this.
Thanks! Yes, I didn't want to just concentrate on one thing; hence the Quidditch. :P And I like writing about Quidditch, so yeah...
& That's something that's debatable now. xD
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