i'm very interested to see what happens next:)
and why James doesn't remember, keep up the good work!Author's Response: he is trying to come up with ways to get Lily back, and he tries to see if that works.i dont know.im in a writers block at the moment so.yeah.ill try post soon! Thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
This was great! It was short but sweet. To be honest, chapters that a too long can be a bit tiring to read. You've left me wanting more! I really loved the flashback to how James first fell for Lily. It was rather cute. It'd be SO interesting to see James as the Goody-Two-Shoes and Lily as the rulebreaker. Anyway, it was a great start and I can't wait for chapter two!
:)Author's Response: thanks! I am in the middle of writing chapter two! Has some drama! :) Report Review
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