This is the worst thing I have ever read. Taking your own life should never be an option. Think of the ones you leave behind. I am sure that Lorcan's brother and parents didn't think that he was worthlessAuthor's Response: I'm sorry you feel that this is the worst thing you have ever read. However, I am in no way condoning taking your life. Seeing as I have had personal experience with suicide, I felt it was something that needed to be addressed. If you did not want to read it, then you should not have read it. I am sorry but it wasn't a story one was supposed to particularly enjoy.
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Wow, this is actually pretty good. I'm writing one myself, it revolves around Harry Potter after book 7 but before the Epilouge, When i'm done, i will post it =) Report Review
Wow, that was very emotional . I think you caught the essence of what it would be like to feel that. I felt so terrible for Lorcan, being alone and feeling helpless. I hope he found his way to the meadow he always wanted. Your story was really good! Keep writing
-RavenclawWayToBeAuthor's Response: Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it. I really tried to capture the feelings someone in that situation might feel and I'm glad to know that I've at least come close.
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