update please! i really like your story, it's one of my fav fanfics at the momentAuthor's Response: I'm coming, I'm coming! Haha, no seriously, I am. Updating a few other stories I haven't gotten to yet, but this one is on its way too! Report Review
Baaah I love this. It's soo cool. I love James S Potter stories, and the added quidditch makes it so much better. Please update as soon as you can :DAuthor's Response: Awh thank you lovie! Update will come very soon I promise! Thank you so much for reading, it means the world! Report Review
No!!! I can't believe Gigi just rejected James like that. The poor guy deserves a bit of love :P
This story is awesome and I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Update will come soon now that I'm back and ready to write! Sometimes you need a break to clear your mind and realize the direction you want to go. Feel cleared and ready to kick it into gear! Report Review
No :( make her love him again!! Really good story. I hope they work it out even though it may take some time. Seems like she still needs to get past the Tyler issue a bit more.Author's Response: Oh goodness she hates Tyler. Gigi will hopefully come around. I think sleeping with the bloke twice has made her realize there's something there ;) Report Review
Gig + James = Good
I can not wait for more!! I want James and Gigi to work this out. Maybe James should write her sisters a letter and then they can come and slap some sense into her.Author's Response: Her sisters would probably do just that. But ever since Tyler, I think they've learned that boys they like aren't good for Gigi. We will see what's to come ;D Report Review
Aha! The mystery of Tyler Gates is revealed! That was my guess of what happened, too, so I was right! Though, to be honest, I kind of wish I wasn't. Poor Gigi :( This kind of explains a lot about why she is the way she is.
They won! I really liked how when they were walking out onto the pitch, Gigi and the team were very disjointed, but as soon as Tyler made a comment about Gigi and James, they completely rallied together. It shows how much they really do care about each other.
Well, I'm very interested to see where this goes, what with Gigi going back to her former Quidditch Only mindset. Especially since James certainly seemed like he was starting to legitimately like her.
Can't wait for your next update, whatever and whenever it may be! And glad to have you back :)
-LauraAuthor's Response: Gigi throws herself into her Quidditch because its all she cares to know about. Sure, she loves her family, but when she was finally doing good in her love life and work life, it all came crashing down. Quidditch is her life and her love. She is convinced that is all she needs. I will update soon! I'm actually back this time ;) Report Review
Wow, I was so excited to see this update! I think it's brilliant, I'm so glad that she beat Gates.
I thought the beginning was nice, how she described her fellow players and where they were in position to her - I also loved how easily they became a team.
I'd thought maybe we'd see more of Barry and Scott and perhaps any rifts that had been created. I mean, they're good quidditch players, so they could probably push it to one side for the game, but other than the punch last chapter, there's not much on it, even the other members of the team don't seem to be too worried about it, which is a bit odd.
Otherwise, I liked seeing Gigi's flashbacks to when she and Gates were together, and also when she found him cheating. It worked perfectly being slotted into the game like that, because then we can see what she's thinking/remembering and also what's fuelling her, especially in that elbow to the face ;)
I'm so excited for next chapter - I hope she doesn't continue to be that cold to James :P
- EmAuthor's Response: You'll see more Barry/Scott action coming up. It was just a glimpse. But it did show you how strong of a bond the two had if they don't even let that break them up. Its a stronger bond than just brothers. It's beaters. Anywho, I'm really really really super glad you liked it! Gigi is going back to her "I'm here for Quidditch, nothing else" mentality. Be prepared. Report Review
Ahhh! Soo happy to see an update. Loved the chapter although a little put off by GiGi's attitude towards James but loved it nonetheless. Can't wait for more!Author's Response: Gigi is getting back into the mentality of "Quidditch is everything". James is shocked and hurt, but he knows thats whats going on. SAD! :( Report Review
Oh my god, I'm so happy you updated! Great chapter, can't wait for more! :)
-ClaireAuthor's Response: I know it took me a while, but its finally there! Yay! Thanks for the review, claire. stay tuned! Report Review
Loved the chapter! Everything is getting so intense, ah! Can't wait for the next update!Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far! Gigi is her own kind of charming ;D Report Review
Matt Hankin! Haven't seen much of him, but his funny!
Of course I also love james and gigi. Loved the little gigi flirting with albus, ha!Author's Response: Matt is that outsider of the team. But you will see a lot more of him, I promise! And oh Albus. Always having to take James's spotlight ;) Report Review
Omg, this book is amazing!:D i couldn't lift my eyes from the page. Please update soon, i can't bare the wait! I adore those james/gigi momentss!Author's Response: Awh thank you! James/Gigi moments will be more and more frequent, I swear. Just you wait ;). Report Review
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT? just.. i.. WHAT?!?!?!?!? how can you do this to me? first letters to lc, now this one! I'm gonna have to go read all your other ones now. i mean, really at least it's not gigi's fault this time :) but really. Can something GOOD happen now?Author's Response: Ahhh! No don't be mad! HAhah. I don't have many other ones, but feel free to give all my stories a shot! Report Review
i think i might love this better then letters to lc. ehhe never mind. nothings better than that Author's Response: Hahaha I'm glad that is your opinion of Letters to L.C! Lenny would be flattered :P Gigi would be offended, but she'd get over it. Report Review
i hope that ms. j is sorry . grrr.Author's Response: Meh she's not. haha :D Report Review
i just noticed... my name is chilton, too! wow, I'm a loser. how did i not notice that? just kidding, my name in black, right guys?Author's Response: Ahah really? That's pretty ironic. Harley would be proud to have another Chilton (who you will be meeting in later chapters). Report Review
love it. i was so bored with you're other story and it's lack of updates that i decided to come here :DAuthor's Response: hahaha now you understand why I haven't updated so fast? Report Review
Oooo...can't wait for the next chapter!! Pretty much in love with this story and all its drama :)Author's Response: Awh, thank you! There is a lot of drama... haa. Report Review
I really like this first chapter!
Just a few weird things: the formatting is super spaced out, which could get annoying to read.
Also, I'm a bit confused abut the use of the word 'punctual'. That means 'on time' but it doesn't seem to fit in context when you use it.
Also, 'adjourning the walls', i assume that's meant to be adorning?
Great premise, great writing, but it could use some editing :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, I noticed the spacing thing was an issue with a lot of my chapters. I don't intentionally do that, the formatting gets messed up when I bring it over from word and I'm too lazy to edit it at the time. Its very time consuming to do. Meh I probably did mess up a few words in there. I'm not grammar princess. I really suck at it, to be honest. I might have to consider a beta pretty soon ;). Report Review
THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING IM SORRY I HAVE NO TIME FOR A LONG REVIEW BUT OIACJNWEOCodisfhvbwoifvhbweifvubweriufyb YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER AND I NEED MORE PLEASE UPDATE SOONAuthor's Response: Awh I like when I read reviews in all caps. you're either yelling at me or really excited. In this case, you're really excited! Thank you so much, Nat. I really take this whole review as a massive compliment. Report Review
I hadn't realised it had been updated but YAYY!!
Ooooh I'm intrigued by Gigi's dream about Tyler??
Oh my god I didn't see that coming - sleeping with his sister-in-law :O
Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
SophAuthor's Response: I'm glad you noticed! That last was just thrown in there last minute. It came to me when I realized I didn't have a lot of Barry/Scott in the story line. So there it is ;). Report Review
Wow. That's was intense :P
Poor Gigi.. All that drama and no quidditch .
I do hope they win and knock Tyler Gates out or something :P...' Even though I get a feeling that they won't.:(
Best scene has to be when Barry tells Scott!Author's Response: Gigi is going to blow up pretty soon if the drama over powers the Quidditch. Nothing should over power Quidditch. Jeeez. Tyler Gates will have an...interesting game ;D. Report Review
can you please continue with the story.
i am itching to read the rest of it, plez.Author's Response: Well of course I'll continue with the story! Report Review
AARGHHH!!! I am now left in a semi-state of suspense!!! I want to know what happens in the quidditch match but I'm happy you didn't leave the Barry thing hanging. I feel so sorry for him but kind of think it's his own fault at the same time. I don't blame Scott for punching him though.
James is seeming a bit too over protective for a 'fake' boyfriend...maybe it's not so fake after all... :)
Thanks for another great chapter, I'm loving the plot for this so far :D
hpsauceAuthor's Response: I like me some suspense! I can't help it. It's addiction. It makes you come back when you see the next chapter is up ;). Report Review
This story is BRILLIANT!
I like quidditch but I'm not a huge fan, so reading a story mostly about quidditch would probably sound insane, except I LOVE IT!!
Gigi is awesome, I love her character and her family. Her nephew Carter sounds so adorable :)
And James - I LOVE me some James Sirius ♥ , he just awesome!!!
I like the fact Gigi kinda started making her way through the Weasley/Potters what with her and Fred getting it on and then becoming James' fake girlfriend and the fact she and James did it twice, on the floor and on the sofa.
I'm totally shipping JaGi (James/Gigi) seriously they've done it twice why can't they get together already!
And Tyler Gates - what's the deal with him and Gigi, I'm dying to know what happened.
Hoping this is updated really, really soon.
-Potterfan310Author's Response: Awh thank you, darling! Carter is modelled after my own nephew. I'm such a proud aunt ;D. Gigi didn't intentionally make her way through the Wotters.She was tricked into it ;). Tyler Gates.oh you'll see ;). Report Review
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