Reading Reviews for Slytherin's Angel: The War
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Carissa The War

10th June 2014:
Hello, I finished reading your series. I think you have a lot of raw talent. I hope you continue to write and that I have the privilege to keep reading. The only reason I don't score 10/10 is because of grammar/punctuation. Get an editor and you'll be unstoppable.

Author's Response: Well thank you! That's very kind of you to say! I greatly appreciate you taking the time to write a review. I'll be sure to take a look at my writing structure, thanks for pointing it out!

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Review #2, by Brittney The War

6th July 2013:
Oh my goodness this is without exaggeration, one of the best stories I have ever read. Your writing is simply incredible. I'm blown away by the poignancy of the hurt, the panic and the hope that you depicted. I didn't think it was possible to see that level of writing! That song also couldn't have been more perfect for this. I just can't sing you enough praises!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your words are too kind, truly! I'm glad you felt those emotions coming across, those are generally the hardest to write to make the reader feel suck painstaking hurt, so I'm glad you felt that! Thank you so much for taking a moment to write me a very glowing review, it is much appreciated! :)

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Review #3, by Cara The War

17th August 2012:
This seriously brought me to tears. Amazing.

Author's Response: Aww, so sorry to have made you cry! So glad you like it! The actual story is halfway through being validated, so go check it out! Thanks for taking the time to read and review, it means a lot!

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Review #4, by Patti The War

16th April 2012:
HELL YEY!!! I like your style XD

tan tan tan
Ladies and gentlemens this is how you write a one-shot!

so much going on in my head right now! she is pregnant?!! OMG!!!

Just one question the war in your story happens in what year? in the books is 1998, one year after Draco's sixth year at hogwarts.
If Ashley is already a healer the war had to happen at least over a year after they left school, right, I don't know? please tell me

Author's Response: I'm very impressed with your knowledge of the story's timeline! I wasn't writing it alongside of J.K.'s story. This is sort of set a few years after they graduate. It always made a more sense to me for them to have gotten some secondary education first, when they were still sort of learning and then have a war begin when they were starting to build families-at their most vulnerable. Why not start a war when our beloved characters are starting to get married and create families? Why not wage war when you could have potentially more "Harrys" with no parents out there?
I understand why J.K. made it during school though, it flowed better and was a spectacular ending. The story would be rather choppy if all of a sudden they graduated, became Aurors, and THEN fought a war. At least it would if it were in her book. My novel that is the backdrop of this story has a few chapters of validation and it'll explain the timeline as I go. Very good catch though! :)

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Review #5, by Nadirika Sarazlia The War

18th March 2012:
Your one-shot just too beautiful for words. No one would believe I'm crying.

Author's Response: Oh my goodness! Thank you! I'm sorry I made you cry, although I am curious to know what part brought on such emotions! Glad you like it, my novel that goes along with this story should be out sometime this summer.

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Review #6, by inkbutterfly The War

23rd February 2012:
Its really good!
Seriously I was captivated the whole time, bloody intense this is!
When the novel is up, I will definitely read it :)
Love how Narcissa killed Bellatrix, she seems to be the one who deserves to do it.
Good job, I love it!

Author's Response: Omg! Thanks for such a glowing review! Glad the first reviewer responded so well. Seriously, you put me on cloud nine. I think I might go ahead and start submitting the story, as I'm about 42 chapters into it, and think I could finish writing it as its validated, maybe in the next week or two, so look for it! Glad you enjoyed it!

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