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Review #1, by hushpuppy I'm Loving It...And I'm Hating It

6th March 2012:
I'm confused about when Yvonne is being controlled. Is it after she acts like a bigot, bully and tramp or while she's being a Slytherin?

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Review #2, by The Empty Frame I'm Loving It...And I'm Hating It

27th February 2012:
This looks really interesting! I'm kind of confused about the Veela DNA thing... And how does a teenager end up living with her boyfriend?

It's a really good idea though, having your main character be a cousin of the Delacour-Weasleys on the other side. All the Next Gens are about the Weasley cousins, so it's cool seeing some other family members. And I think Yvonne liking house-elves is a really nice touch! Great job!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you for the compliments! The veela DNA thing and the rest of it is going to be explained more in the next chapter, I promise you! Just wait and see. :D

Thanks for reviewing!!!

~~LilyAngiPotter


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