I hope you continue this story! I love it and want to know how it ends.

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you gave the wrong names for Hermione's parents. I just looked it up. they are Wendell and Monica Wilkins. if you don't believe me look on pg 96 (paperback version) of the deathly hallows

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Pretty please update soon? :3

Author's Response: I'm sorry, i have been so slack with my updating! I have just started my new story, Second Chances and this one hit the back burner for a little while. I promise I'll update asap!

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Great Story! Next chapter? :3

Author's Response: It's coming! I have just started a new story, Second Chances and I am just waiting for the next chapter on that before I post the next chapter. But the chapter is titled "A trip to the dentists" so you can guess where the story is heading


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Yet another excelent chapter in the books(or book as it were). Nice lead up to the next chapter with just enough of a hint to keep me wanting more. 10/10

Author's Response: Aww thanks :) This is basically a filler chapter just hinting at what is coming. Which is.. a lot :)

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I absolutely love your story, and not just because I am Adelaide born and bred, so am enjoying the setting being in my city... You have a lovely writing style, very descriptive... I like the whole concept of Harry needing to get away, but can he ever really get away, wherever he goes he finds more trouble... I am looking forward to updates...

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! I love Adelaide and I am having fun just incorporating my favourite parts.. like ice coffee.. that stuff is amazing!

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What has bilbo baggins been teaching them!

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Nice birthday celebration

Author's Response: thanks :) I wanted it to be a really happy occasion

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Nice chapter - a bit over explained. Ginny would have known all about the graveyard and Voldemort's rebirth - Harry gave an interview about it. She didn't know about the Horcruxes. I'm hoping she'll share her experiences with him?

Author's Response: Thanks for the feed back. I did think along those lines when I read it back but to me it makes sense as when Harry gets started the words just seem to pile out. Ginny's experiences will come up later in the story.

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That was a very sweet and loving chapter. I need an insulin shot now.
Great story telling so far keep it up. Yet another 10/10

Author's Response: I just felt that the first important event after the war would be really special to both Harry and Ginny and wanted to make it so. Glad you liked it!

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It is nice. The fact that they are leaving. And I enjoy Ginny seeing Harry naked and all the embarassment stuff is cool. I expect their making love scene soon!!!

Author's Response: after that scene Harry decides to take it slowly, he is still recovering after all, but it will get a lot more heated soon!

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Very nice start! I will definitely read the next chapters!

Author's Response: thanks! hope you enjoy it

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it is relly good did you write more to it

Author's Response: yeah, I'm currently finishing the next chapter. hopefully it should be up soon.

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GAH! Not a cliffie!
Great story so far, I can't wait for more.
Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Sorry I couldn't resist. Actually it was because I'm at a cross roads now, depending on what happens next is going to say where the story is going. So hopefully next chapter will be up soon


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more.
need more.
lots more

Author's Response: :) Thanks, I'm nearly finished the next chapter, it will be up soon

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GREAT BATTLE!!! Amazing story so far:) please dont stop, ...ever.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have a ridiculously happy smile on my face right now.

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Ooh, I was right, I want mooore!

My only complaint, and it is a very, very tiny one, is that you spell out the spell itself rather then the name. I don't know why, that's just annoying me the littlest bit... I mean, it has a name for a reason, otherwise what's the point of having a name at all? But like I said, tiny tiny complaint. I think you've only done this 2 or 3 times. Besides that, I love it :D

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm not sure what you mean, as in when i say he summoned something instead of accio, or the times where i say he waved his wand and something happened? Hope you keep reading!

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Iiii started to tear up during the funeral... I'm loving this story, I have one more chapter left and that makes me sad :( I'm going to want more xD

Author's Response: Thanks, I've still got a long way to go, so there will be plenty more.

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I have read this chapter and Harry's speech in particular with tears running down my face... Beautiful writing!! And now I see another chapter posted... Yippee!!

Author's Response: Aww thanks! When I started his speech I intended it to be entirely different, but that's what came out and I decided to leave it. I hope you keep reading.

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Very sweet. They deserve to have a good time and enjoy themselves.

Author's Response: Thanks again for you review, means a lot to me!

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Enjoying your story so far, looking forward to updates!!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm having fun writing it and deciding where they should go next.


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Nice chapter. I'm glad that Harry and Ginny were able to get away, they need some time to themselves. I hope they are able to hide in London for a while.
There were several grammatical errors - I can't see Hermione saying "Is Harry and Ginny here?" Instead of "Are Harry and Ginny here?"

Author's Response: Thanks again for the review. I tried to fix the grammatical errors, but often they are just because that is how I would speak, so I don't pick it up.

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Really good chapter. I think you captured the characters well. I'm so glad that Ginny decided to put Harry first, not many people do that. I find it interesting that Mr Weasley is the one who lost it. Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: I made Mr Weasley lose it because often he is seen as completely one sided, but in the books he gets angry when the safety of his family is in question. Thanks heaps for the review.

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Interesting start! Can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: Thanks, it's my first fan fiction so I am really excited about it.

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