Brilliant story then a stupid ending all of a sudden. You could have made it into a brilliant story with a sequel but instead seemed to get lazy and decide to kill everyone off. Come on people!?!? Do the rest of your story justice, change the ending!!!

Author's Response: No promises but I am going to re-think the ending.

Thanks for the review.

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That ending broke my heart.. But the story was soo amazing. I couldn't stop reading. You are an amazing writer!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments. Appreciate it.

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love it! u create a good feeling of suspense. thumbs up

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the entire story was great and i understand that u needed a twist in the ending but omg this?!! this??!! i cant believe i spent my entire day staring at the computer for this!! its not practical either.. they are not muggles!! they can apparate or put up a shield charm!! and this is hermione we are talking bout... the brightest witch of her age and according to this dracos standards match that... how could they possibly die then from something as trivial as a muggle 16 wheeler.. its not fair by the characters Rowling created...
p.s i apologize if this offends you in anyway but thats just my opinion.. take care and i sincerely hope you rethink the ending

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wow. did not see that ending coming. great story though! :)

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WHAT THE HECK.
WHAT. JUST. HAPPENED?
I WAS HOPING FOR A HAPPY ENDING! COME ONE MAN!
UGHH.. EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO cRY MY EYES OUT!

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Hermione's 18th birthday would have been while she was with Harry and Ron when skipping their 7th year. After the war, her 19th birthday would have been August just before the year began. Thus, he would be asking her in her 20th birthday if her asked her on her next birthday.

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im confused...so ginny died and came back to life?

Author's Response: Yes she 'died' and was revived by the healers.
It happens in hospitals all over the world every day. Why not at Hogwarts??

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Harry? Ron? Ginny? Whoa... Ginny
Love it

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Wow great story but I am sad to how it ended maybe you should add a small chap. On what happened because did they both die? ( hermione and Draco ) ?

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You are very accomplished at writing these sorts of conversations

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...honey
Those ellipsis points say so much its unbeliveable

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Great chapter, i cant seem to acess chapter 2 which is a shame but i cottoned on the plan well enough am really enjoying this

Author's Response: Chapter two should be available in a couple of days.
Glad you are liking it.

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Dumbledore surviving. Hmmm. Not sure what i think of it, well written and engrossing firt chapter though, well done

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I have to say I am disappointed in the fact that there obviously will be no sequel since they died but I was pleasantly surprised at the depths of your plan for this story.

They really were Romeo and Juliet after all :)
2 lovers face obstacles to be together and tragically die after everything they went through.

I hope you continue to write more fanfictions thank you for the wonderful story

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have written others like 'Beautiful when she smiles.' and New Beginnings'. Give them a try.
Thanks for the review.



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Hi!
I found this story today and I couldn't stop reading it until now! (it's almost 2 am here)
I loved it! :D
I'm still in shock with the end. Are you sure none of them cast a protection spell? I really can't believe they died.
The story is amazing! I will definitely see the other stories you wrote! Thank you for posting this one!
Ines

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Amazing writing ability- a true rival to JK herself!

I read the whole thing in a day! I couldn't stop!

However, did not appreciate te ending. If it was the shock factor you were after, you certainly achieved it!!

Keep writing- I'm excited to read your future works!!!

Author's Response: Have a look at 'Beautiful when she smiles.' and the two parts of 'A parting well made'

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WHAT WHAT NO SO MANY FEELS WHY WHY DID YOU KILL THEM WHY D:

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WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH YOU? WHY WOULD YOU END THE STORY THAT WAY? I DEMAND A SEQUEL!

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It was sooo good but why? Is it because of the Romeo and Juliet theme you've been going for this whole time? Either way this was sooo good and sooo sad. I cried when I read the last paragraph. You are a fantastic writer and look forward to reading your future stories :)
-Scriptie

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate your support for this story.
Am currently planning my next effort.

Thanks once again.

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This is amazing! Thankyou so so much for writing them!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks again for the review.

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No no no!!! Please tell me they arent dead!! :O no no no no im gonna cry!!

Author's Response: Afraid so. So sorry. Hope you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review.

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I appreciate the good spelling and proper word usage, as
well as the the fact it doesn't read as though it were written
by a child. The plot development is a bit weak because it's
rushed, but overall an enjoyable story to read. I am
shocked at the ending...I should have seen it coming!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a kind review. I'm afraid rushing plots is something I tend to do. If I have an idea I have to get it on the page. Spelling and word usage come naturally to me as I waz tawt propur English at skool.

Thanks once again.

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SO DUMB! last month a tractor trailer hit my car. this was no fun >:[ very. upset.

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THEY DIED?! i CAN'T BELIEVE THEY DIED!! WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!

Author's Response: Sorry but yes, they died. Nobody seems to mind that Shakespeare did it too.

Thank you for leaving a review.

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