i really like this story, i've read a few of your other stories too and they're really good. i hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thanks, but I'm really stuck on this one and not sure where to go with it yet. It's not abandoned though. Report Review
Wow, fantastic x cannot believe it's over, such a brilliant story. I really hope you do a sequal :-) x xAuthor's Response: Thanks, I have three more chapters written but I'm just not sure if I'm satisfied with them yet. I'll see where they head a bit better before I post anymore.
Thanks for reading. Report Review
I'm enjoying this very much - look forward to see where you're going to go with this.
ElizabethAuthor's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it. Unfortunatly I don't like the next chapter I wrote so I am going to post a new story I have completed and come back to this when I have something I like.
I thought I liked it when I started posting but I've changed my mind. I hope this doesn't disappoint anyone. I won't abandon it. Report Review
Fantastic, this is building up brilliantly :-) xAuthor's Response: I hope it meets your expectations. I'm still writing it so if you have any suggestions please feel free to let me know.
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I love your story.
I usually don't like it when people mess with the original story, but I think you did a great job with this one.
I especially like it because you didn't have to add any characters that weren't in the story to it.
And the story makes a lot more sense your way, like they should of just done all of this in the first place, and Harry would of had a better childhood and Sirius would of been spared seven years out of Azkaban.
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!Author's Response: Thanks, I never thought he should have been left all those years. Undoubtedly some one would have checked up on him at some point. I can't believe they would really have just dumped him and walked away. He was too valuable.
I have several that cover someone taking him but I've not been able to post them yet. Thanks for the positive reveiw. Report Review
Love this story! Truly fantastic! Please post soon x xAuthor's Response: Thanks, this is just a four part for now but I will add more later. Probably as a separate story. Report Review
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