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Review #1, by Ron 4 Hermione Mother to be

23rd August 2012:
This is great, I really hope you continue it! :)
I thought the charactersation was great, Ron is great and I hope he and Harry stay supportive. Hermione seems a little OOC but since she is pregnant I think it fits nicely. Draco, hmm we only saw him for a little bit but I already think he's up to something- that may just be me being biased becasue he isn't my favourite character! :P
I love the plot idea, especially since the dad is a muggle, it's not something you see a lot.
I didn't notice any mistakes so good job, and this is a really good start to what could be an amazing story!
10/10

Author's Response: I am hoping to continue writing this, I've just gotten a bit distracted with a bunch of other plot bunnies that have made their way into my brain and felt the need to be written right away! I'm so glad that you like my Harry and Ron. I wanted this to be a bit different from normal. I can honestly see Hermione wanting to be normal just one night with her muggle boyfriend prodding her along that road and then things just get out of hand. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #2, by EverMalfoy Mother to be

14th April 2012:
Sorry for the second review, but I was so talking out of my butt with the draco/hermione thing! I just didn't read the author's note:3 sorry bout that!

Author's Response: dont worry about it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #3, by EverMalfoy(EverDiggory) Mother to be

14th April 2012:
Hey doll, sorry for not logging in, I was too lazy!

First off, I love these kind of stories!

From what we've read of these characters, I think you have them pretty canon. Well.about as much canon is it could be for such a situation. If that makes any sense? I love that Ron was still...well, Ron, and Hermione was very realizing and whatnot of her mistake.

I didn't see too many errors, so it really wasn't all that distracting.

I really want to know more about Luke, how he had Hermione so wrapped around his fingers, and whatnot. I also want to know why he saw it fit to leave her.

I like how you explained some things that others find too pesky, so they just leave it out, such as Dumbeldore taking care of the appointments and whatnot, her getting...I don't want to say fat;P but bigger because she's pregnant? Haha, sorry that awkwardness of explaining.

The only thing that really made me do a double take was how Draco let her off the hook so easy. But--now, I might be wrong--I think this said it was a draco/hermione? Is he going soft?;D I don't know, I'm sure it will be revealed as you update--which I hope you do very,very,very,very,very soon,

I really love this, if you can't tell with all those very's.

Please,please update! Thanks for the awesome read!

xoxo

Ever

Author's Response: Well i'm glad that you liked the chapter and thank you so much for the comments on characterization. I know Hermione is slightly ooc but I'm glad that you think for the most part she is in character. I do still hope to update though some of my other stories have taken a priority! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #4, by Toujours Padfoot Mother to be

15th February 2012:
Well this is an interesting twist! I'd never even considered relationships between Hermione and a muggle. It would make sense, of course, if she did, seeing as how she spends her holidays amongst them. I do feel quite bad for her. I can't even imagine what it would be like to be pregnant when you're somewhere like Hogwarts. I'm very glad that Harry and Ron are supportive thus far and I hope they continue to solidly have her back. :)

Author's Response: Yeah I wanted it to be something different or at least not with draco so i'm glad you found that interesting. I can't imagine what it would be like either to be pregnant at Hogwarts and all the people there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #5, by charlottetrips Mother to be

15th February 2012:
Hi! I like Romione and I like it especially when Ron's like a man and not the goofy loveable guy--though I like that too! This is interesting because I thought that you would be having Draco be the father, etc. as that's usually what I see when Hermione is pregnant but it wasn't and I was happy to see that.

Iím loosing my virginity to him, - loosing should be "losing". There were other little spelling errors throughout this.

Your descriptions flowed well and I liked that you took the time to describe the little things like her mom using the pads of her thumbs to wipe away the tears, etc. I especially liked how Harry choked out that line.

A good start!

Author's Response: In this story I really want to portray Ron as the strong friend that I know he is so i'm glad that you like my characterization of him. Honestly I feel if Draco was the father of Hermione's child Ron would really have a much harder time coming to terms with Hermione having a child and would have more outbursts. I hope to get a beta for this soon to help with those small spelling mistakes. I'm glad that you felt my descriptions flowed well! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #6, by ariellem Mother to be

8th February 2012:
Yeah Ron/Hermione! I love this ship! Well first off I think Hermione was just a tad ooc, but I did like your characterization of Ron and the story looks very interesting. :)

Author's Response: Yeah i think in any story where Hermione ends up pregnant she will be a litte bit ooc as its not really in her character to end up that way. But I'm really glad that you enjoyed the way I portray Ron. I hope to continue with this story soonish! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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