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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by BKL8008 After the Battle

16th March 2012:
The line of going about the day's business, this and that, and then stopping to just break down and cry sums up the day after a horrible loss just perfectly. It was well written, but I have to say that setting it to a hymn like this just didn't work for me - personally. But that's just me. In ignoring that, which I can easily do, the rest of the piece is very good and thought provoking. In canon, Harry went to bed thinking about a sandwich. One has to wonder what he did when he woke up?

Author's Response: Well thankyou :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know the hymn won't be for everyone but it was just an experiment I wanted to try. I'm pleased that you were able to get past that, as it were, and still enjoy it.
In my mind this is Harry in the evening after he has had his sandwiches and slept for most of the day.
Glad you liked it.

Alex :D


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Review #2, by Starkidgleek After the Battle

18th February 2012:
Wow I love the writing style. It's very inspirational and flows very nicely. The word choice is perfect and expresses your thoughts very nicely and fluently. I loved the poetry and song incorporated throughout. Love this little sweet story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very flattered by your lovely review. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know what you mean about giving/getting reviews, and this one definitely made me happy!

Alex :D


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Review #3, by Janner After the Battle

12th February 2012:
Very moving. The poem 'For the fallen' has a powerful meaning to me personally.

Thank you, very well done

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Moving is what I was going for. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing, it's so encouraging for me.

Alex :D


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Review #4, by magicmuggle01 After the Battle

12th February 2012:
Once more your continuing skill in your writing continues to shine through like a beacon.
This is an excellent piece of writing, and very powerfully written. And a lot of people will be able to relate to it.
Great work and full marks.
You've given me an idea for a one shot to do with this theme.

Author's Response: Wow, and as ever thank you so much for reading and especially for reviewing. I shall have to keep an eye out for your one shot then! Do let me know if/when you decide to publish it.

Alex :D


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