You better continue to write this, Amoretti! This is just so, so, much of a cliff hanger. You're really evil for hanging me of this cliff.
I love how you portrayed Rose, a little on the wild side. I couldn't imagine, with both Ron and Hermione as parents, she could have been smart, and always with the rules, or always wild. You kept both, and I really liked that.
Write more, or I may have to abandon this story. Okay, I couldn't do that. I like it too much.
As a grammar question, hoping you would know. "Stupid, stupid brain!" she snapped... would it be She snapped or she snapped? I've seen it used both ways.
Keep on writing :3 Report Review
Mhm. Seems like a very interesting story you've got plus I like how you describe things. I wonder how this would all end..mhm. I love it! hahaha, can't wait for chapter two but take your time :P 10/10 Report Review
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