go on writing itīs a great couple!!! Report Review
Hi! I love prologue, not many people have explored this part of Minervas life yet and Im really glad you have, I was going to- but I dont have the nerve. I love the characterisation of Dougal, he seems so charming and lively. Im glad you portrayed him to be like that. Then Minerva almost the exact opposite of Dougal, I hope the contrast between them will bring out some great and sweet chemistry. Youre right when you say it is a story of love that can never be, because it cant and thats really sad because Minerva deserves a bit of happiness for once, shes always sat back and let others have what she earned. In my mind she has anyway.
This is a great start to the story and I hope you do continue with it,
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