I'm rather uncertain if your goal was to portray Ginny and Hermione as shallow and unlikable or not. That's certainly how I felt about the characters in this one-shot. Don't get me wrong, the one-shot's not terrible, but it's not to my tastes. Report Review
This was really good hope to see u right more U shud chek out my story Unexpected Blossoming Love 10/10 Lyss Report Review
Interesting oneshot! Dramione rocks ;D I read your other review and found that my comment regarding this fic was already remarked upon! But this doesn't unhinge me; it was good, but satisfactory is not what you achieve for, and I do hope that if you had written the relationships in more depth rather than a vague overview then you would've definitely gone for the gold. Maybe even a flashback scenario of Romione and Hinny breaking up? I did enjoy this, and Monroe's view on women and relationships always astounded me. ;P ~RavenclawStudent. Report Review
Any story that breaks up Hermione and Ron is *Aces* with me! Maybe you could have gone a little deeper into the relationships, but it was enjoyable as it is. Good.Author's Response: Thanks soo much for reviewing this story when no one else has yet :) That's what one of my friends told me. Report Review
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