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Review #1, by Rosethorne The Asylum

26th February 2012:
This is Rose m here with your review

I'm so sorry it's so late. I was ill and then we went away, but anyway onto the chapter!

I really liked it! I think you did an amazing job and I didn't even mind that there wasn't much dialogue! I think you had the pace spot on and I loved the way you got into her head. The ending I didn't expect either so good job with that. I think this is a really wonderful piece and I'm glad I got to read it! Also, I didn't find any mistakes with spelling and grammar!

Really good work!

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Review #2, by LilyFire The Asylum

13th February 2012:
So, I started out with Bellatrix in mind, and then switched to Luna, was none of those! I think it's a brilliantly written piece. The emotion is wonderful, the pacing and emotion and feeling (or lack there of) was great. The description was near perfection. You needn't worry about the flow either, it was wonderful. I saw her in Azkaban, trapped their for whatever reason-and then she wasn't. She really was in an asylum. It was brilliant. I don't know what else to say, other than you've done an amazing job!

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Review #3, by ImagineHarmony The Asylum

7th February 2012:
Amazing, raw emotions expressed in this short, talented piece by you :) It's amazing! I love your ending line, 'death had claimed another victim'. This one-shot toys with the mind, imagery is mind-blowing. Great job, continue epic writing! ;)

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much for your lovely review! I am so glad you liked that line - I was scared it may be a little too cliche, but I guess it fits with the piece. I have such a 'thing' for ending lines. :)

I definitely will continue to write - whether they'll be epic, we'll see!

Thank you very muh again! xo

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