Reading Reviews for the last lily
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MarauderLover7 chapter 4

9th March 2012:
I love the idea - there aren't many stories that focus on James and Lily outside Hogwarts. :)
One tip I would give is to check your spelling and grammar, but otherwise it's good. I can't wait for the next update. :)
Keep Writing!
MarauderLover7.

Author's Response: thanks so much for reading!
and thanks for the advice! i will definitely keep that in mind!


 Report Review

Review #2, by KxxDxx chapter 4

4th March 2012:
Love it how I can easily I can put this into the real story, it's fantastic ;D x post soon x

Author's Response: thanks! i would love to have my chapters posted quickly but the validation process has been really bad lately.

 Report Review

Review #3, by Inkypen chapter 3

26th February 2012:
This is good but you have made a really big mistake. All the times you talk about Harry, you spell his name without a capital letter... Besides that it's really good!

Author's Response: thank you so much for telling me! before i upload a chapter i always write it out in Microsoft word and i guess it doesn't capitalize it like it should. and im glad your enjoying the story!

 Report Review

Review #4, by KxxDxx chapter 3

25th February 2012:
Awesome. So sad. Cannot wait until the christmas episode x post soon x

Author's Response: thanks for the review! i will try to get chapter 4 up soon!

 Report Review

Review #5, by KxxDxx chapter 2

25th February 2012:
Aww so sad :'(
Post again soon x

Author's Response: i know its sad. D: but i originally wanted to start with Marlene dying but then i just decided to speed things up a bit and so i chose the prewett brothers instead.

 Report Review

Review #6, by KxxDxx chapter 1

25th February 2012:
Haha! That's so funny x

Author's Response: lol im glad! and thanks so much for the review!

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login