Great story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank You so much!! I'm so happy you like it! x Report Review
I LOVE THE HATE BETWEEN HERMIONE AND DRACO!Author's Response: Haha, ThankYou!! Dramione's are my favourite type of fanfic (:
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Really good :) You have a depth to your writing that gives your characters more dimension, you know? Keep going, you're doing great.
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wow amazing luv it god georgina sounds like me georgina lol luv it keep up the work :p xAuthor's Response: Haha Thank You again! Really? That's creepy! I will. (: x Report Review
this is the best chapter ive ever read in my life its amazing this is amazing this should be a book i luv it!!! its the best story on this website i will tell all my friends about this story my friends jess would love this thanks keep up the work luv ya xAuthor's Response: Thank you! You're really sweet! This really isn't the best story, but thank you all the same! Please do tell your friend Jess! Umm Love you too? x Report Review
Really great start :D Can't wait for you to update,
xAuthor's Response: Thank You (: I will do, writing it now. x Report Review
This is an amazing start for a first fanfic. You write really well have describe things in such details. Which is a good thing. I can't wait for the next chapter and do hope to see it soon. I just don't know why Hermione is so sad. Her friends and family are fine. ??? But i'm sure that will come clear soon.
A tip: smaller paragraphs make the story easier to read and allows reader to read better. Well I think it does:)
But this chapter was still fantastic so keep writing.
~LoVe_SAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much! I just cried a little! I will make sure I write smaller paragraphs and I hope to write more dialogue. I am about half way through writing chapter 2. Hermione is sad because of the war, which I'll go into more next chapter (: Again, thank you so much!! xx Report Review
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