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Review #1, by Missyduck Don't touch my gummy bears, it could be the last thing you do

13th July 2012:
This is all fluffy and made me smile a whole bunch. I really liked this story. It was so cute!:)

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Review #2, by Jchrissy Don't touch my gummy bears, it could be the last thing you do

25th April 2012:
This is a humorous story!! I typically write very serious works, so stepping back and reading something light and funny was really nice :)! And... I am now craving gummy bears!!
I do think when you have time you should fine tune it :) I think if you read it aloud a few times you'll see the parts than might benefit from being smoothed out. Also, I would die to have Lily's bathroom! I would never have to spend a small fortune on makeup again! You are obviously very creative!

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Review #3, by happy_person Don't touch my gummy bears, it could be the last thing you do

11th February 2012:
this was a pretty good idea, however your execution could use more work. Perhaps if you didn't rush into some parts of it and just eased the reader into the situations, it could have been more appreciated. But nonetheless, it was a fairly good story that i enjoyed reading (:

Author's Response: thanks for the constructive criticism! I think I'll edit it soon. Check it out when i do!

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