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Review #1, by Avanell 2 Chase Hugo Weasley

2nd March 2012:
Cute, interesting story! Love the animal part of it :D Some of the letters in words were mixed up...fast typing?

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!:) No, it wasn't fast typing, I'm writing this story on my Kindle and it doesn't really like when I write... oh well. Thanks for reviewing!
slytherindraco


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Review #2, by Miss Muggle Chase Hugo Weasley

2nd March 2012:
I like Chase's reaction to meeting Hugo. Clearly, he has been told a lot of...interesting things about his father. Did Hugo have a paternity test or something to make sure his is really his father? Because, I would imagine he would be very doubtful since his wife was cheating on him and all.
At one point near the beginning, you wrote Jane instead of Jillian. Also, there are again some spelling mistakes and large paragraphs. It takes away just a little from the great story.
I really like this story and can't wait to read more! Update soon please!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, Chase took a DNA test, as said in the summary. Thank you for pointing my thing with Jane. I have another charecter in another fanfic named Jane, so I write down her name a lot instead of Jillian by accident. I'm sorry about the spelling, as I'm writing this story on a Kindle. Thanks for telling me about the huge paragraphs, I'll try to make it shorter. Thanks for reviewing!
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Review #3, by Miss Muggle The Phone Call

2nd March 2012:
I definitely like the idea of this story a lot. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens and how Hugo and his family react.
But...there are quite a few annoying spelling and grammar mistakes. Nothing a good read through wouldn't fix, though. And I think it might be more helpful if some of the paragraphs were broken up and not so large.
I love how Hugo runs an animal shelter! I have never read a fic with a wizarding animal shelter before. Is it a shelter for wizards, with magical animals or is it a place where muggles can go as well? If it said, sorry I didn't catch it.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm writing this story on a Kindle, so I'm SO sorry about that. I will try to break up the paragraphs, thanks for the advice. Well, it's a Muggle shelter, but people know about it in the Wizarding world, since he's put ads in the Prophet. Thanks for reviewing!
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Review #4, by potterfan310 The Phone Call

28th February 2012:
this is interesting, i havent read many where hugo is the main character and he is normally in the backgroud keep it up and update soon x
-potterfan310

Author's Response: Yeah, me niether, that's why I wrote this. Thanks!
-slytherindraco


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Review #5, by Harry and Ginny The Phone Call

23rd February 2012:
this seems an interesting story! I never read a story like this so I can't wait to read more! :D update soon please!!!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'm glad this story is unique!!! I will update soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing and the10/10!:)
slytherindraco


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Review #6, by Meegley The Phone Call

23rd February 2012:
Interesting so far!!! Keep going!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so much, I will keep on going!:)
slytherindraco


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Review #7, by R&H fan The Phone Call

23rd February 2012:
I think you have a great history here, keep writing chapters :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, I will!:)
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