A simply wonderful story. I enjoyed this very, very much. You write quite well and wrote the characters perfect.
I love how Ron is so determined to not like Hermione but can't resist her instantly upon seeing her again. It's perfect where he starts to touch her with hand holding under the table and trying to be close to her from then on.
Poor Hermione... she didn't have a chance!!
Great job.Author's Response: She really didn't have a chance. They were right for each other from the very beginning. Thank you so much for your kind review, I'm thrilled you liked it! Report Review
I really like this story! Really cute and I love Ron's last line about not dancing with Krum :)
-IlianaAuthor's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
aww this made me smile :)Author's Response: I'm so glad to heart that, thank you!! :) Report Review
I absolutely love this story :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Very good written, one of the best fanfiction I have ever read. Especially the parts from Ron's point of view. There was one thing though, I don't think Ron wouldn't say fucking, he would say something about Merlin or mabye bloody hell, but not fucking. You should really think about writing a fanfiction from just Ron's point of view, because you do it very good.Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I wanted to show his emotion in the moment but it's possible I overdid it a bit. Thanks for the compliment and for reviewing! Report Review
Aww, great little OS! It was so cute & well written... sigh, I love Ron & Hermione Author's Response: I love them too :) Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
I think its sweet :) you did a good job of incorporating lyricsAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Very cute story. Yes, no dancing with Krum ;) Not for this story.Author's Response: Haha very true!! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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