ummm? that's just cruel and all that it sorta makes me :( but it's cool keep writing. Report Review
This was a very good chapter and I very much enjoyed reading it! Thankyou for participating in my challenge! Report Review
Well. That WAS unexpected! I can't believe that I'm reading a James/Lily story that seems to be slightly less cliched than all the ones out there! Now you've hooked me so that I feel I have to read on and find out WHY James of all people would be pointing a wand at Lily. Makes me think he was under the Imperius curse.
Your writing is very well put together and I didn't have attention on any mechanical stuff. You also have a good hand at description and I like how you didn't reveal it was James until close to the end!
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