What a great Chapter it was quite a bit longer than your previous ones, I enjoyed it quite a bit. I like that Hermione got a make over and some girl time. I sometimes feel bad for her that she is stuck around two boys all through out her schooling.
Awww, Connor is so sweet. I just want to hug him for being such a sweetie to Hermione. I enjoy when Draco hit on Hermione. I laughed out loud at his reaction. He is such a creep.
I really did like this chapter and when Aura and Emma stuck up for Luna. Go "twins"!
I just want to help you. The quote should be "Houston, we have a problem" It's from Apollo 13 when they contacted the Houston space command in 1970 in Houston, TX. Also, I wanted to let you know that it should be Blaise Zabini not Zambini. Zambini comes from the movie about the Zambini Brothers who were circus performers.
Again really liked this chapter. I can't wait to read more. I'm intrigued into what she read in that flash back and what is troubling her now.
Megthechef43Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the review - and also thank you for telling me about the Zambini vs. Zabinim I 'll have to change that. Again, thank you for spending the time on reviewing.
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Really good :)
Can't wait to find out whats wrong with Hermione! Report Review
they're both breaking rules to go shopping? seems legit. :P and omg, what happened to hermione? she's ill :( and conor is so cute! he seems to genuinely care for her! that's so sweet! and cute little flashback, btw. :) hope you update soon!
and just a doubt, do you do the IB by any chance?Author's Response: Thank you! Also, I'm going to sound really dumb, but what is the IB? Report Review
Oh, and there's a typo in your chapter title, btw.Author's Response: Thank you so much, you're the first person that's told me - I'm surprised my beautiful beta's didn't pick it up. :P Report Review
CHOCOLATE SNITCHES! OMG, I'D DIE FOR ONE. :P
great chapter! total legit verbal fight with pansy, haha. i do that with my bro ALL the time :P i like your story so far! keep it going :) Report Review
Nice story! Sounds very interesting so far! I love how you introduced the story! (: Report Review
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