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Review #1, by megthechef43 These Three Words Part Two

14th May 2012:
Ludi Sen,

What a great Chapter it was quite a bit longer than your previous ones, I enjoyed it quite a bit. I like that Hermione got a make over and some girl time. I sometimes feel bad for her that she is stuck around two boys all through out her schooling.

Awww, Connor is so sweet. I just want to hug him for being such a sweetie to Hermione. I enjoy when Draco hit on Hermione. I laughed out loud at his reaction. He is such a creep.

I really did like this chapter and when Aura and Emma stuck up for Luna. Go "twins"!

I just want to help you. The quote should be "Houston, we have a problem" It's from Apollo 13 when they contacted the Houston space command in 1970 in Houston, TX. Also, I wanted to let you know that it should be Blaise Zabini not Zambini. Zambini comes from the movie about the Zambini Brothers who were circus performers.

Again really liked this chapter. I can't wait to read more. I'm intrigued into what she read in that flash back and what is troubling her now.

Megthechef43

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the review - and also thank you for telling me about the Zambini vs. Zabinim I 'll have to change that. Again, thank you for spending the time on reviewing.
Ludi Sen


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Review #2, by Ron 4 Hermione These Three Words Part Two

13th May 2012:
Really good :)
Can't wait to find out whats wrong with Hermione!

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Review #3, by Nikki These Three Words Part one.

10th May 2012:
they're both breaking rules to go shopping? seems legit. :P and omg, what happened to hermione? she's ill :( and conor is so cute! he seems to genuinely care for her! that's so sweet! and cute little flashback, btw. :) hope you update soon!

and just a doubt, do you do the IB by any chance?

Author's Response: Thank you! Also, I'm going to sound really dumb, but what is the IB?

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Review #4, by Nikki Hogsmeade

10th May 2012:
Oh, and there's a typo in your chapter title, btw.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, you're the first person that's told me - I'm surprised my beautiful beta's didn't pick it up. :P

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Review #5, by Nikki Hogsmeade

10th May 2012:
CHOCOLATE SNITCHES! OMG, I'D DIE FOR ONE. :P

great chapter! total legit verbal fight with pansy, haha. i do that with my bro ALL the time :P i like your story so far! keep it going :)

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Review #6, by Nikki 1. The Daily Prophet

10th May 2012:
Nice story! Sounds very interesting so far! I love how you introduced the story! (:

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