Great story, VoldemortXBellatrix is one of my favorite ships. One little criticism though. I wish you hadn't made Bella so weak. Bellatrix LeStrange would never show such great weakess especially in front of the Dark Lord. She's a hardass. Yes, she does have feelings & weakness like everyone else. But she wouldn't have broken down so completely even for love. Just my opinion ^_^Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
About Bellatrix -yes, I know she's a tough woman and she shows no weakness, and I thought about that after I had finished this. But I wanted to portray how much younger she is in here, and how much more innocent than the Bellatrix we are introduced to in the books... And in my little head canon, it's incidents like that with the Dark Lord that have lead her to be so tough and merciless...
Once again thank you! Constructive criticism is always more than welcome! :) Report Review
Nice job :) I really liked it!Author's Response: Thanks Pen :) Report Review
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