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Author's Response: BECAUSE I'M A TERRIBLE PERSON WHO CAN'T WRITE CROSSOVERS PROPERLY!

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I love this! I'm such a fan of Doctor Who and Harry Potter..oh my gosh you are my hero! You have added the two greatest things in the world into a story! Yes! Very brilliant! Can't wait for more!
-Scriptie

Author's Response: Thank you! I know, Harry Potter & Doctor Who are awesome! (Potterwho FTW) Thanks, I'll try and update it as soon as possible. While I procasinate and not-write, you could check out my other Potterwho story (Like A Romance Novel)

Jaz

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First of all: I LOVE DOCTOR WHO! and David Tennant is probably my favourite doctor...or matt smith...or tom baker
anyways i really like doctor who and harry potter so im really keen to read more soon!
i think you wrote this chapter really well and i like how understanding Harry is!
PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!

Author's Response: I love Doctor Who too!! Eleven is my doctor but Ten comes in a close second.
I've never seen Tom Baker before but I'm starting to watch Classic!Who.
I'll update this when I get muse to come back :D
Jaz

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Hi!! This if for the review swap :D

I don't really watch Doctor Who, but I'm familiar with the premise of it and have watched one episode like a decade ago :P So I could follow along. I love the first line, it really kind of puts you into the thick of the action from the start and it's an interesting, kind of funny line. The whole chapter flowed well, I think there could have been more description of the scene or the room she was in so that it could feel more real to the readers. But, apart from that, the story idea is intriguing, and I love that you're going to slowly unfold it for us backward with every chapter. And that Harry is carrying through for Hermione. Great Job!

Author's Response: Hi! Yay for review swaps!!
WHY DOES NO ONE WATCH DOCTOR WHO! At least your familiar with it. thank you! Yeah, I may go back & edit this chapter and add a few more description and imagery.
Thank you!!
Jaz

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Hey, thanks for the swap!

Like I said, I've never seen Dr. Who, but I would like to start watching it. This was really great! I think you captured Hermione's personallity wonderfully.

Also, the end, the talk with Harry. I think you captured Hermoine and Harry's friendship so fantastically! Everything flowed well, and it was nice to see Ron's concerned side :) I'm really interested to read more of this, brilliant start, keep it up!

Author's Response: Hey!
Why does nobody watch Doctor Who! Honestly, it's amazing and really really really really really really really really really really good!!
Thank you! I'm always so worried about Hermione's character because it's so defined.

Yay! Thank you!
Jaz

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First of: I've never seen a doctor who episode. haha but i still really enjoyed this start, it takes a really nice spin at the end where harry says that he understands what it's like to be special.

I think you capture Hermione particularly well :)
a really good start and a very enjoyable read

*huggles*
Cheery

Author's Response: YOU MUST WATCH DOCTOR WHO! Seriously, it's amazing!
Thank you for an amazing review! I am getting along to reviewing your story. Sorry for taking so long.
But seriously, this review made me smile! Thank you so much!!
*huggles back*
Jaz

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I think i would fully appreciate this if I watched the Doctor Who you know,but I still enjoyed this:D
this was a great set up chapter,and ...

can I tell you a secret?I dont hate ron in this one:O dont tell anyone,I always hate him!Kudos to you:D

I like Harry,and Ron you've characterized them well!

This was a set up chapter for more to come,so I cant go deep into much of anything.

Flow was good,and there were noe errors that really caught my eye!

I think you've got Hermione down for the most part,but I think she'd be slightly afraid...hesitant,if you will,to tell everyone about the doctor. Obviously,thats part of the story,so it was to be expected(: I hate when people jump down your thraots cause whoever wouldnt do whatever:P forget that.

One thing I absolutely must credit for you is that you are daring to write a crossover,using probably one of the hardest,most difficult characters possible--Hermione!

Good job,and thanks for the swap:D

xoxo

Ever

Author's Response: You must watch Doctor Who! It's amazing!!!
:O Haha, yay for you-not-hating-Ron!! Haha

Oh good I'm always so worried about characterisation and all that stuff because they are so defined and you can always tell when you get them wrong so I'm glad I did it right :D

THanks for the review and the swap!
Jaz

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