Reading Reviews for Ronald Malfoy
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Review #1, by Elizabeth Wolf The Welcoming House

20th April 2012:
Hey! I decided to give this story a try (the title was too hard to pass up) and I just want to say that I love your premise so far. Seeing Ron so disappointed to be in Gryffindor is fun to read, especially since he was so keen to get into it in the book. I have spotted a few spelling and grammatical errors, but that's something that will get better the more you write. I was wondering, though, for the time being if you needed a beta? I've never particularly been one before, but I'm willing to give it a go for you if you'd like. Let me know! 9/10 for the whole story so far, 10/10 for this chapter. :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you very much for your positive response :) I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story! I would love to have a beta, I always reread my chapters to check for mistakes but I always seem to miss some :P Thanks again

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Review #2, by Avanell 2 The Sorting Hat

11th March 2012:
Another interesting update...wonder what the twins will think when they see/meet Ronald Malfoy

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm actually really looking forward to developing the relationships with Ron and other characters :)

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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 The Sorting Hat

9th March 2012:
Excellent. I kind of thought that the hat would spot something in Ron.
But I think I may have spotted a small mistake. You have the hat saying do I put you in Gyffindor? and then saying no. I think you meant, do I put you in Slytherin?
Another 10/10 and I can't wait to see what Draco thinks of the hats decision. So plz update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love hearing your opinion. I hadn't actually spotted that mistake so thanks a lot and I'll change it now :P

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Review #4, by magicmuggle01 The Hogwarts Expess

1st March 2012:
This story is most certainly very good. And now I'm confused and wondering if Ron is a spoilt brat. I think the sorting will answer one or two questions so 10/10 adding to favs so I know when you update. Can't wait to see which house you place Ron in and will you follow the books and have him friends with Harry? Plz update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very very much :) 10/10 wow! I'll update as soon as I can and thank you for reading :)

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Review #5, by magicmuggle01 Diagon Alley

1st March 2012:
Some how I find it hard to even attempt to think of Ron as a spoilt brat. But you appear to have fitted that fact in rather nicely. Must move on so 9/10 and onto the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm trying to keep fairly loyal to canon Ron but I'm wanting to incorporate some of the Malfoy characteristics into Ron too. I hope I'm doing ok with that and thank you for reading and reviewing :)

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Review #6, by magicmuggle01 Punishment

1st March 2012:
When I saw the title of this story I decided to read it and see what it was like.
So far I like the sound of it. And can't wait to see what else you have planned so 9/10 for your start and moving onto the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I really hope you enjoy the other chapters too

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Review #7, by VeeKAY The Hogwarts Expess

1st March 2012:
Hey there! I reckon you have a pretty good thing going on here ;) so keep writing, and you'll do great! Just a note, in your story summary, you misspelt malfoy (as malphoy), so you should probably change that x) but otherwise, this is a really good chapter, keep it up and update soon!

Author's Response: Oops, I hadn't noticed, thanks for letting me know :P thank you for response and I'm glad you liked it :)

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