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Review #1, by theblacksisters Namesake

28th September 2013:
Definitely getting better. Looking forward to more.

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Review #2, by Gabriella Hunter Namesake

8th March 2012:
Hello!

I saw this today and got really excited! I've been waiting for an update on this forever! I am really starting to get curious about her past and I can't wait to get more information and see how far she and Ted can go. Sorry for the delay on my own work, I had to do some editing and all that boring stuff but I can't wait until you update more!
Until then,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Awh, thanks. There is pleanty more to come about her past and ancestory with some Ted interaction thrown in as well. Guess I will just have to wait patiently... Just don't make me wait too long! I've got a chapter for Daughter of Fire in validation then I have to update Twist of Fate because I haven't done that in a while so I hope that ties you over,

GirlOnTheSidelines.


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Review #3, by Gabriella Hunter Memories

12th February 2012:
Hello again! This girl is so different from your other characters that I've read so far but I love how you've weaved them together (Eloise, hehe) and btw, I have something else to say. I'd like to say that, as a black woman I am so happy that you've given Fred Weasley the Second dark skin, not just becasue he is half-black, but just because he's often whitewashed. I don't like getting into debates about this sort of thing because people often get offended but its such a breath of fresh air to see him described a bit differently. Anyway, great chapter, I love Dora's relationship with Ted and I'm a bit sad to note that you haven't uploaded more chapters! Until then!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello, yes, all my stories are weaved together although this one takes place a while before the others. You're welcome, it annoys me too when people say he's white, I don't get how people can just make him white when is mum is obviously black! Chapters are coming as fast as validation will allow them but I have several stories to update so this one may take a while unfortunatly. So until then... thank you for your awesome reviews.
GirlOnTheSidelines.


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Review #4, by Gabriella Hunter Prologue

12th February 2012:
I am giving you your first review! Nicely written and I have no complaints at all to give you. For a prologue, it gave you quite a bit of information onto who the character would be and I like her inborn haughtiness. Eleven year olds with a thirty-year old mind, haha. I shall continue on!

Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, I wasn't too sure how this would go down. I love her inborn haughtiness too, it's so much fun to write. I'm still waiting for more chapters in 'This is Angelina' and 'A Force of Wills'! Thank you for the lovely review.
GirlOnTheSidelines.


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