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Review #1, by Ella Please, Don't Leave Me

21st June 2013:
WAH! Stop making me cry so hard! Your story is so totally amazing! You should get published! Srsly, I love your story! Thank you SO much for writing this!

I really like James/Lily fanfics, your story just made me so happy!! Maybe u could continue this story? Or maybe do a similar one but Harry/Ginny or Ron/Hermione

U know, the song doesn't actually have to be a girlfriend singing to her boyfriend :) U could even do it as a Fred/George fanfic. I know they are so close because they are twins, but I refuse to believe that they haven't had at least twenty arguments in their entire life :)

Please do continue writing!!! I can see u have potential!!!

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Review #2, by RavenclawWayToBe Please, Don't Leave Me

14th February 2012:
This story was really good! I loved that you didn't picture Lily and James as the eternally perfect couple. I definitely think that even though they were great together, sometimes things like this would happen, and in many stories that I've read, they fight at the beginning, then get together in 7th year, then happily ever after until they die, but in your story you showed that their relationship had more substance than that, and I think you did an amazing job. I love the song you used, and i definitely think it had meaning in this story! You're an awesome author, continue writing! :)
-RavenclawWayToBe

Author's Response: Thank you for such a positive review! Im glad someone else liked hoe I portrayed lily and James. I know people who hate how I made them seem so screwed up when they are great. But thank you so much (and I will continue writing) :D

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