Well to start this off, I love the pairing and how you expressed both of the characters. I also like your style of writing. Just one thing: Why do you leave such a huge gap between lines? It makes it very difficult to read. But over all, it was great! Loved it :)Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments!! The gap between the paragraphs is because of how I transfer the writing from my Word Producer into the box for this site. It does this rearraging thing-and I agree it's very hard to read-sorry about that part. Thanks for the review! xxx Report Review
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