Reading Reviews for The Proposal
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Review #1, by MirandaTraveler Chapter 1 - Harry's Story

7th March 2013:
Awww! So cute! I really like the way Harry is totally spacing, because that seems like something he would actually do. Can't wait for you to update, your cliffhanger is killing me! Your a very good ship writer. I'm gonna read some of your other stories now :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've been on a writing hiatus for awhile, but now I'm back :) Hopefully I'll get a chapter for this story written soon (I have a couple other stories I'm adding chapters to as well).

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Review #2, by MirandaTraveler Prologue

7th March 2013:
I like the way this is starting off, and your Cheers reference! I am exited to see Harry's proposal story and see what happens between Neville and Luna. Also curious to see why Ron has proposed twice! Wondering why Draco is hanging out with them, though. All in all, your story is off to a good start, and I didn't really see any grammar or spelling mistakes.

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Review #3, by parseltongue_witch Chapter 1 - Harry's Story

30th April 2012:
Keep writing! I found this as I went through a lot of the Dramione stories. This is actually one that seems quite amazing. It has lots of potential, and your writing style is also very good. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't know why I never finished this story, I had an entire outline written out, but then I changed jobs and I guess it got lost. I'm in the process of re-outlining it and hopefully will get it done soon!

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Review #4, by luv_me_hate_me Chapter 1 - Harry's Story

10th February 2012:
Oooo! I really like the plot line in this.

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Review #5, by luv_me_hate_me Prologue

7th February 2012:
Ooo! I really like your idea. Please write more!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it. I just posted up Chapter two. I wasn't too sure about this story at first, but i'm more confident with it now as I've been writing. I've had the idea for awhile, but never could come up with a center plot for it, but I think the one I have makes it work. I'm currently working on Chapter 3 and the other chapters should follow shortly after that (hopefully) thought they'll probably all be kinda short, like these are.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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